Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复表达，且部分词汇使用不准确。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意动词形式的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot recently because I am preparing for the IELTS test. Writing down vocabulary helps me remember new words more effectively.

Sugestão: 回答中表达较为自然，但句子结构可以更简洁，连接词使用不够恰当。建议使用更流畅的连接词，并丰富细节。

Exemplo: I like to write a diary because it helps me remember what happened during the day and also makes me feel relaxed.

Sugestão: 回答较为简单，缺乏具体细节和逻辑连接。建议增加原因说明，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I don't think the things I write will change because once I write them on paper, they remain the same and can be kept for a long time.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，正确使用比较级，并避免重复。

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because with modern technology, typing is more convenient and faster for me.

× I'm preparing my IELTS test recently and to memorizing the to memorize the vocabularies.

✓ I'm preparing for my IELTS test recently and memorizing the vocabularies.

动词prepare后面应接介词for，且动词memorize应使用动词原形或动名词形式，不能用不定式to memorize。这里用memorizing更符合句意。

× I had to write down the vocabulary because it is useful for me to remember the vocabularies.

✓ I have to write down the vocabulary because it is useful for me to remember the vocabularies.

句子描述的是现在的情况，不能用过去时had to，应使用现在时have to。

× I had to write down the vocabulary because it is useful for me to remember the vocabularies.

✓ I have to write down the vocabulary because it is useful for me to remember the vocabulary.

vocabulary作为不可数名词，前后应保持一致，不能前用单数后用复数。

× Well, actually I have a habit of writing the diary and As for me, writing the diary is a good way for me to remember the day and it can make me feel better.

✓ Well, actually I have a habit of writing a diary and, as for me, writing a diary is a good way for me to remember the day and it can make me feel better.

diary前应使用不定冠词a，因为这里指的是一本日记，而不是特指某一本。

× Well, no, because you write down the things on the paper.

✓ Well, no, because I write down the things on the paper.

回答中应使用第一人称代词I，表示自己的行为，而不是泛指you。

× The paper will keep for a long time.

✓ The paper will be kept for a long time.

此处应使用被动语态，且the paper前的定冠词使用正确。

× You know, these days the computers the typical technology has developed and typing As for me is very convenient and more quick, quick and more quickly.

✓ You know, these days computers and typical technology have developed, and typing, as for me, is very convenient and quicker.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词，重复使用quick和quickly错误，应使用比较级quicker。

× typing As for me is very convenient and more quick, quick and more quickly.

✓ Typing, as for me, is very convenient and quicker.

quick是形容词，quickly是副词，修饰convenient应使用形容词形式，且more quick应改为比较级quicker。