Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免使用负面自我评价，如“lazy person”，并且应更自然地表达观点。可以简洁直接地回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: No, I don't write a lot because I prefer speaking to typing when communicating with my friends and family. I find it faster and more convenient to use voice messages.

Sugestão: 回答中应注意语法准确性，如“strangers novels”应为“stranger novels”或“novels about strangers”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I enjoy writing novels, especially stories about strangers. I like creating unusual characters and imagining them doing unbelievable things because it makes the stories interesting and fun.

Sugestão: 回答应更清晰地表达观点，避免模糊的词汇如“maybe”。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明想改变的内容。

Exemplo: Yes, I think my writing will change, especially the background settings. I usually set my stories in difficult situations, but now I want to create more positive environments for my main characters.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“typing is cheaper than writing”不准确。应避免不必要的细节，表达更自然且逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it saves time and allows me to use various apps and internet slang. Also, typing is more convenient and cost-effective than handwriting.

× No I don't, I'm a lazy person and I don't like writing a lot and when I was communicating with my friends or my parents I usually use my voice instead of typing.

✓ No, I don't. I'm a lazy person and I don't like writing a lot. When I communicate with my friends or my parents, I usually use my voice instead of typing.

句子中“when I was communicating”使用了过去进行时，但根据上下文，描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“when I communicate”。

× Well, I'd like to write novels, especially strangers novels.

✓ Well, I'd like to write novels, especially stranger novels.

“strangers novels”中“strangers”应为形容词形式“stranger”，修饰名词“novels”。

× I'll create some very weird character and making them to do some unbelievable tasks.

✓ I'll create some very weird characters and make them do some unbelievable tasks.

“making”应与前面的动词“create”保持并列结构，使用动词原形“make”，且“character”应为复数“characters”。“to do”中“to”应去掉，正确用法是“make someone do something”。

× I'll create some very weird character and making them to do some unbelievable tasks.

✓ I'll create some very weird characters and make them do some unbelievable tasks.

“character”应为复数形式“characters”，因为前面有“some”，表示多个。

× I think maybe it's background.

✓ I think maybe it's the background.

“background”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的背景。

× I usually make the background in a bad situation, but now I want to change.

✓ I usually set the background in a bad situation, but now I want to change it.

“make the background in a bad situation”表达不自然，改为“set the background in a bad situation”更合适。同时“change”后应加宾语“it”。

× I want to make a good background for my main character.

✓ I want to create a good background for my main character.

“make a good background”表达不自然，改为“create a good background”更符合英语习惯。

× I prefer typing a lot because typing can save my time.

✓ I prefer typing a lot because typing can save me time.

“save my time”应为“save me time”，因为“save”后接人称代词作间接宾语。

× If I writing I need 2 paper and pen is too expensive.

✓ If I write, I need two papers and pens are too expensive.

“If I writing”应为“If I write”，动词应为原形；“2 paper”应为复数“two papers”；“pen is too expensive”应为复数“pens are too expensive”，与前文呼应。