Writing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you write a lot?
Candidato
Yes, I often write some interesting and important thing on paper, like my key point of essays and important main vocabulary, my lessons. It's better for me to remember.
Examinador
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidato
To be honest, I don't like writing some academic essays or I think it is too boring. But when talk about my interest, my major art, I really like writing some inspirations on paper or write some.
Examinador
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidato
Absolutely. I think the things I write will change over time because everything changes quickly. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my thoughts will develop and bring new ideas to my writing. For example, I might write differently about certain.
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidato
Well I prefer handwriting on paper because it feel more natural and personal. I can use different marks or labels on paper and write anything freestyle and not in structures and limited.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意单复数形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。
Exemplo: Yes, I often write down interesting and important things on paper, such as key points from essays and important vocabulary from my lessons. This helps me remember them better.
What do you like to write? Why?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答不够完整且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并具体说明喜欢写什么内容及原因。
Exemplo: To be honest, I don't enjoy writing academic essays because I find them boring. However, I like writing down my inspirations related to my major, art, because it allows me to express my creativity.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较好，但最后一句不完整，建议补充完整并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: Absolutely. I believe the things I write will change over time because everything evolves quickly. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my thoughts develop, which brings new ideas to my writing. For example, I might write differently about certain topics now compared to before.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性，同时丰富表达内容。
Exemplo: Well, I prefer handwriting on paper because it feels more natural and personal. I can use different marks or labels and write freely without being restricted by structure.
Gramática
× Yes, I often write some interesting and important thing on paper, like my key point of essays and important main vocabulary, my lessons.
✓ Yes, I often write some interesting and important things on paper, like my key points of essays and important main vocabulary from my lessons.
这里的thing应该用复数形式things，因为表示多个事物。key point也应为复数key points，表示多个要点。
× But when talk about my interest, my major art, I really like writing some inspirations on paper or write some.
✓ But when talking about my interest, my major art, I really like writing some inspirations on paper or writing some.
动词talk后面缺少-ing形式，应为talking，表示正在谈论。后半句write some应改为writing some，保持平行结构。
× For example, I might write differently about certain.
✓ For example, I might write differently about certain things.
certain后面缺少名词，且应为复数things，表示某些事物。
× Well I prefer handwriting on paper because it feel more natural and personal.
✓ Well I prefer handwriting on paper because it feels more natural and personal.
主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词feel应加-s，变为feels，保持主谓一致。
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