Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Avoid incomplete or unclear phrases like 'Or journalist'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot, especially during my free time. For example, I enjoy writing articles and journal entries to express my thoughts.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question. Avoid repeating phrases like 'more fun'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: I like to write stories because I hope to publish my own book someday. Writing allows me to express my feelings more clearly than speaking, and it feels like communicating in a different language.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and structured answer with linking words. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and be more specific about how your writing and topics might change.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my writing style and topics will change over time because I will write about my life experiences, which will evolve as I grow.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference or balanced opinion with reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to compare handwriting and typing.

Exemplo: I like both handwriting and typing because handwriting is enjoyable and personal, but typing is easier and faster for me.

× Yes, I do write a lot, especially on my free time I try to write.

✓ Yes, I do write a lot, especially in my free time I try to write.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'my free time'. The correct preposition to indicate a period during which an activity happens is 'in'. So, it should be 'in my free time'.

× Yes, I do write a lot, especially on my free time I try to write.

✓ Yes, I do write a lot. Especially in my free time, I try to write.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence combining two independent clauses without proper punctuation or conjunction. Splitting into two sentences improves clarity and correctness.

× Or journalist.

✓ Or I want to be a journalist.

The phrase 'Or journalist.' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'I want to be' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I hope to have my own book in the future, so I hope to be a writer.

✓ I hope to have my own book in the future, so I hope to be a writer.

No correction needed here as the prepositions are used correctly.

× And writing makes me express myself better than speaking.

✓ Writing helps me express myself better than speaking.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can be avoided for clarity. Also, 'makes me express' is less natural than 'helps me express' in this context.

× It's like another language.

✓ It's like another language.

No correction needed; sentence is correct.

× It's more fun to write, and it's expressive and more fun.

✓ It's more fun to write, and it's expressive.

The phrase 'and more fun' is redundant since 'more fun' was already stated. Removing redundancy improves sentence clarity.

× I think the way I write will change definitely.

✓ I think the way I write will definitely change.

The adverb 'definitely' should be placed before the main verb 'change' for correct emphasis and natural word order.

× And maybe the topics over the time.

✓ And maybe the topics over time.

The phrase 'over the time' is incorrect; the article 'the' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'over time'.

× I think whatever happened in my life I will write about.

✓ I think I will write about whatever happens in my life.

The tense inconsistency between 'happened' (past) and 'will write' (future) causes confusion. Using 'happens' (present) aligns with the future action 'will write'. Also, reordering improves clarity.

× I think I like both because when you handwrite it's fun and maybe.

✓ I think I like both because when you handwrite, it's fun, and maybe...

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation. Adding commas and ellipsis indicates a pause or unfinished thought.

× Better or no, but writing, typing will be easier and faster.

✓ Maybe better or not, but typing will be easier and faster than handwriting.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing clarifies the comparison between typing and handwriting and corrects sentence structure.