Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“helps helped me to count the experiments”表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I used to keep a diary before entering university, which helped me record my experiences and feelings. However, now that I always have my mobile phone with me, I rarely write by hand.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子冗长。建议使用简洁明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: I usually write short notes, like reminders about deadlines, schedules, and shopping lists, to help me stay organized.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不完整，且缺少连贯性。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, my writing has changed over time. I used to write stories and poems, but now I prefer to record my personal feelings and thoughts about life.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议明确表达观点，使用恰当的词汇，并举具体例子支持观点。

Exemplo: Although both typing and handwriting have their advantages, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and takes more time. For example, I like to write letters and messages to my friends by hand.

× I used to write a diary before I enter the university and it helps helped me to count the experiments and the feelings about it.

✓ I used to write a diary before I entered the university and it helped me to count the experiences and the feelings about it.

这里的时间是过去的动作，应该用过去式。'enter' 应改为 'entered'，'helps helped' 应为过去式 'helped'。另外，'experiments' 应为 'experiences'，但这不属于语法错误范围。

× But nowadays as I bring close my mobile phone with me, I seldom write do a write.

✓ But nowadays, as I bring my mobile phone close to me, I seldom write.

短语 'bring close my mobile phone with me' 结构不正确，正确表达应为 'bring my mobile phone close to me'。此外，'do a write' 是错误表达，应直接用 'write'。

× It's not a very completed one, just some fragmentation of information and the information about the deadlines or some schedule and about the list that of the thing I need to buy or do.

✓ It's not a very complete one, just some fragments of information about deadlines, schedules, and a list of things I need to buy or do.

'completed' 是过去分词，形容词应为 'complete'。'fragmentation' 应用复数名词 'fragments' 更合适。'schedule' 应用复数 'schedules'。'the list that of the thing' 结构错误，应为 'a list of things'。

× As for the development of my personal mental feelings, I become more I have more deep thinking about the life and I used to write some stories and poems, but nowadays I prefer to record my feelings of.

✓ As for the development of my personal mental feelings, I have deeper thoughts about life. I used to write some stories and poems, but nowadays I prefer to record my feelings.

'I become more I have more deep thinking' 结构混乱，应改为 'I have deeper thoughts'。'deep thinking about the life' 应为 'deeper thoughts about life'。句尾 'feelings of' 不完整，应去掉 'of'。

× For example, just for the letter and the message I take to my friend.

✓ For example, just for the letters and messages I send to my friend.

'take to my friend' 用法不当，表达发送信息应使用 'send to my friend'。'letter and the message' 应用复数 'letters and messages'。