Writing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you write a lot?
Candidato
Oh well, if writing just meant to write something down and the answer will definitely be yes 'cause you know, I am a student, major in finance mathematics and when you started mathematics you have to do a lot of exercise and this will lead to a lot of writing. But if the writing means to write some diary or some article.
Examinador
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidato
Oh well, I prefer to write some stories, a little short stories or little novels, especially for, uh, my favorite character and other, umm, walks 'cause this kind of activities not only improve my creativity but also make give me an opportunity to.
Examinador
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidato
Oh well, I think the answer will be yes, 'cause in my childhood the fantasies I write always end with an old ending, like an Princess and the Princess live live together and have happily happily live together. But with the feminist thought growth in my with with with myself growing, I would prefer to end the story like. Brings us become.
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidato
Oh well, it depends on what I am writing. If I was writing some a formal things like essay or an article, I would prefer typing 'cause it is a more efficient ways to for me to finish my work. But if I writing some personal things like diary, I would prefer handwriting 'cause I think handwriting will be a better way to explore myself.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答时语言不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且内容重复。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因，避免冗余。
Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot because as a finance mathematics student, I have to complete many exercises that involve writing. However, I rarely write diaries or articles.
What do you like to write? Why?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和停顿。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明喜欢写故事的原因。
Exemplo: I like to write short stories and novels, especially about my favorite characters. This helps me improve my creativity and allows me to express my imagination.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，且内容不完整。建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点，具体说明写作内容如何随着成长而变化。
Exemplo: Yes, my writing has changed. When I was a child, my stories had simple happy endings, but now I prefer more complex endings that reflect my mature thoughts.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: It depends on what I am writing. For formal work like essays, I prefer typing because it is faster. For personal writing like diaries, I prefer handwriting as it helps me express myself better.
Gramática
× when you started mathematics you have to do a lot of exercise and this will lead to a lot of writing.
✓ when you start mathematics you have to do a lot of exercises and this will lead to a lot of writing.
这里时态应保持一致，描述一般事实时应使用一般现在时。'started'应改为'start'。
× you have to do a lot of exercise
✓ you have to do a lot of exercises
exercise在这里指多项练习，应使用复数形式'exercises'。
× this is a more efficient ways to for me to finish my work.
✓ this is a more efficient way for me to finish my work.
way是单数，ways是复数，前面用的是单数形式this is，故way应为单数。
× But if I writing some personal things like diary, I would prefer handwriting
✓ But if I am writing some personal things like a diary, I would prefer handwriting
条件句中，进行时态应使用助动词be加动词ing形式，缺少am。
× like diary
✓ like a diary
diary前应加不定冠词a，表示泛指一本日记。
× it is a more efficient ways to for me to finish my work.
✓ it is a more efficient way for me to finish my work.
介词'for'后面不应有'to'，应直接接动词不定式结构。
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