Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“prefer calculate”应为“prefer to calculate”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法结构。

Exemplo: No, I don't write a lot because I find it challenging. Instead, I prefer doing calculations and listening to music or learning grammar.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但句子结构和用词有待改进，如“it's kind of expression”应为“it's a form of expression”。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子。

Exemplo: I like to write about my feelings every day because it's a form of expression. Writing helps me relax and express everything I feel.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够清晰，如“it kind limit myself”应为“it kind of limited me”。建议注意时态和语法，表达更准确。

Exemplo: Yes, I think my writing will change over time. When I am older, I believe I will write more maturely and naturally because I have a larger vocabulary now compared to when I was young.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“when you're right, right”不清楚。建议简洁表达，避免重复，并注意语法准确。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I type slowly. Also, handwriting allows me to express myself better since I can see how my writing looks.

× I prefer calculate different sums and also listen to other things like music or some grammar.

✓ I prefer calculating different sums and also listening to other things like music or some grammar.

动词prefer后应接动名词形式，calculate和listen应改为calculating和listening。

× The first thing that come to my mind is I like to write my feelings every day because it's kind of expression.

✓ The first thing that comes to my mind is I like to write my feelings every day because it's kind of an expression.

主语the first thing是单数，谓语动词come应为comes；expression前缺少冠词an。

× When I write every day, I will feel relaxed and also I feel like I just expressed everything.

✓ When I write every day, I feel relaxed and also feel like I have just expressed everything.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，will feel改为feel；表达刚刚完成的动作应使用现在完成时，just expressed改为have just expressed。

× Yes, actually it changes time by time, like when I'm older I will feel like I write more mature and also natural because when I was young I didn't know a lot of vocabulary so it kind limit myself to express my feeling.

✓ Yes, actually it changes time by time, like when I'm older I will feel like I write more maturely and also naturally because when I was young I didn't know a lot of vocabulary so it kind of limits me from expressing my feelings.

mature和natural应使用副词形式maturely和naturally；kind应为kind of；limit后应接宾语me；表达限制应使用短语limits me from expressing；feeling应为复数feelings。

× so it kind limit myself to express my feeling.

✓ so it kind of limits me from expressing my feelings.

短语应为kind of limits，myself用错，应为me；表达限制应使用limits me from expressing。

× so it kind limit myself to express my feeling.

✓ so it kind of limits me from expressing my feelings.

myself用错，应使用宾格me。

× I like handwriting more because I type quite slow.

✓ I like handwriting more because I type quite slowly.

slow是形容词，修饰动词type应使用副词slowly。

× because when you're right, right, you can know what it looks like.

✓ because when you're writing, you can know what it looks like.

right是错误拼写，应为writing。