Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意语法结构，使表达更流畅自然。

Exemplo: Not really. Nowadays, many organizations promote paperless work, so I prefer typing on my computer or iPad instead of writing by hand.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，明确表达喜欢写什么及原因。

Exemplo: I like to write notes about my major because I have a habit of taking notes during class to help me remember important information.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但表达略显重复且部分句子不完整。建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Exemplo: Absolutely. As the saying goes, 'the only constant is change.' I often update my notes, especially when I take different courses.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点且内容具体，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意介词使用和词汇搭配，使表达更准确。

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is more environmentally friendly. Also, when typing, I don't have to worry about my handwriting or using ink and paper.

× Not really, because nowadays there are several organizations. Trying to promote no paperwork, that's why I choose use computer and iPad by typing.

✓ Not really, because nowadays there are several organizations trying to promote no paperwork. That's why I choose to use a computer and iPad for typing.

原句中“Trying to promote no paperwork”是一个不完整的句子，缺少主语，导致句子结构错误。应将其与前句合并，形成完整的句子。此外，“choose use”缺少不定式“to”，应为“choose to use”。“computer”和“iPad”前应加冠词“a”，并且“by typing”改为“for typing”更符合表达习惯。

× I like to write something about a major because I have the habit of writing notes, so I always taking notes on the class with my paper.

✓ I like to write something about my major because I have the habit of writing notes, so I always take notes in class with my paper.

原句中“always taking”时态错误，应为一般现在时“always take”。“on the class”介词使用错误，应为“in class”。“a major”应为“my major”更符合语境。

× Absolutely yes. As the old saying goes, the only thing that is constant is change. I always change the thing I write. For example, take a different course notes.

✓ Absolutely yes. As the old saying goes, the only thing that is constant is change. I always change the things I write. For example, I take different course notes.

“the thing I write”应为复数“the things I write”，因为后文提到多条笔记。“take a different course notes”中“a”与复数“notes”不匹配，应去掉“a”并加主语“I”。

× I prefer typing because typing is environmental friendly. You don't need to consider about your character shape, but for handwriting you need to worry about ink and paper and the shape of your characters.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is environmentally friendly. You don't need to worry about your character shape, but for handwriting, you need to worry about ink, paper, and the shape of your characters.

“environmental friendly”应为副词形式“environmentally friendly”。“consider about”搭配错误，应为“worry about”。句中逗号和连词使用也做了调整，使句子更通顺。