Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且句子较长不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并注意时态一致。

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I am in my final year of school and preparing for graduation. I have to write many articles to introduce myself to universities, so I am quite busy with writing these days.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，语法混乱，且有重复和无意义的词汇。建议简化句子结构，清楚表达喜欢写小说的原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: Sometimes I like to write novels because it is interesting and allows me to be creative. I can imagine and create my own stories, which makes writing enjoyable.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明写作内容的变化，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, my writing will change a lot. After graduation, I won't write articles about school anymore. Instead, I plan to write more novels and fictional stories.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议明确表达喜欢手写的原因，避免重复，并使用正确的语法结构。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and real. Although my handwriting is not very neat, writing by hand helps me connect better with my thoughts.

× I have written a lot because I am in the final years of my school so I am busy with my graduation.

✓ I have written a lot because I am in the final year of my school so I am busy with my graduation.

这里“final years”应为单数形式“final year”，因为通常指的是最后一学年，属于单数。

× I had to write a lot of article to explain who I am to the university.

✓ I had to write a lot of articles to explain who I am to the university.

“article”应使用复数形式“articles”，因为前面有“a lot of”，表示很多，需用复数。

× So I write a lot of article now.

✓ So I write a lot of articles now.

同上，“article”应为复数“articles”，且“write”时态正确。

× So I write a lot of article now.

✓ So I write a lot of articles now.

重复前面错误，需用复数形式。

× And sometimes I like to write the novels because the wire was while writing novels, I will feel very interesting and I I have I will feel more creative, I will for more feel more creativity and I can crave everything by myself.

✓ Sometimes I like to write novels because while writing novels, I feel very interested and more creative. I can create everything by myself.

句子结构混乱，语法错误多。去掉多余词汇，调整语序，使句子通顺且符合表达习惯。

× I think it will be changed a lot because I'm in the final years of my school after my graduation.

✓ I think it will change a lot because I'm in the final year of my school. After my graduation,

“will be changed”被动语态不合适，应使用主动语态“will change”。“final years”应为单数“final year”。

× I think it will be changed a lot because I'm in the final years of my school after my graduation.

✓ I think it will change a lot because I'm in the final year of my school. After my graduation,

重复前面错误，需用单数形式。

× I will not, I will not write the article about my graduation, so I will.

✓ I will not write articles about my graduation, so I will

“article”应为复数“articles”，且句子应简洁连贯。

× I will not write the article about my graduation, so I will.

✓ I will not write articles about my graduation, so I will

重复前面错误，需用复数形式。

× I will write some more novels and other fictions.

✓ I will write more novels and other fiction.

“fictions”通常不可数，改为“fiction”。

× I prefer handwriting because firstly I might think I think my handwriting is is not is very pretty and secondly has handwriting makes me the reality of the words and it can makes me feel more better.

✓ I prefer handwriting because, firstly, I think my handwriting is not very pretty, and secondly, handwriting makes the words feel more real and makes me feel better.

句子中代词使用混乱，重复词汇多，语序不当。调整代词和句子结构，使表达清晰自然。

× it can makes me feel more better.

✓ it can make me feel better.

“more better”是错误的比较级表达，应直接用“better”。