Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "express my emotions and my feelings" since both mean similar things. Also, use the correct tense and phrasing, for example, "I'm not the type of person who writes a lot" instead of "tried a lot."

Exemplo: I'm not someone who writes frequently, but I enjoy writing occasionally to express my feelings.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy. The phrase "my feelings for something and express my emotions" is repetitive. Also, the sentence structure is a bit unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words.

Exemplo: I like to write about my daily experiences because it helps me reflect on my feelings and emotions.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, use "improve" instead of "be better than now" and connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will improve with more practice, and my style will become more polished over time.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more coherent and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct phrasing such as "I like the feeling of writing by hand." Also, avoid mixing tenses; "improve" should be "improving."

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the feeling of writing on paper, and it helps me improve my handwriting skills.

× I'm not the type of person that tried a lot, but I love writing sometimes to express my emotions and my feelings.

✓ I'm not the type of person who tries a lot, but I love writing sometimes to express my emotions and my feelings.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'tried' when referring to a habitual action. The correct tense is present simple 'tries' to indicate a general habit or tendency. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'who' when referring to a person.

× As I as I said, I love to write what happened in my day and my feelings for something and express my emotions in writing.

✓ As I said, I love to write about what happened in my day and my feelings about something, and to express my emotions in writing.

The sentence has repetition ('As I as I said') and lacks prepositions ('write about', 'feelings about'). Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs commas and conjunctions to improve clarity and flow.

× Yes, I think my writing will change if I practice more and my writing style will be better than now.

✓ Yes, I think my writing will change if I practice more, and my writing style will be better than it is now.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma before 'and' to separate two independent clauses. Also, adding 'it is' before 'now' clarifies the comparison.