Writing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you write a lot?
Candidato
Not like I usually did, meaning that when I was a kid I wrote a lot of stories for fun, but today it's more for academic purposes. So I'm in law. I write a lot of essays on my computer, not by hand.
Examinador
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidato
I enjoy writing detailed responses to my friend's personal problems because they often come to me for advice on psychological issues. As instance, when they face challenging regarding relationship difficulties, I give them my opinion, yes.
Examinador
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidato
I hope so. I hope I don't have to write the essays all my life. And maybe more interesting things such as contracts, even emails to my colleagues will be more fun, I imagine. But yeah, it will be more professional.
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidato
I prefer to type because the lecturer can go really fast sometimes so it's hard to keep the rhythm and also I like to write full sentences, it helps me to learn, so handwriting is too slow for me.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être plus concise et naturelle. Évitez les phrases trop longues et redondantes, et structurez votre réponse avec une phrase principale suivie de détails précis.
Exemplo: I don't write as much as I used to when I was a child because now I mainly write academic essays for my law studies on my computer.
What do you like to write? Why?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Votre réponse gagnerait à être plus fluide et naturelle. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées et évitez les erreurs grammaticales pour rendre votre discours plus cohérent.
Exemplo: I like writing detailed advice to my friends when they have personal problems, especially about relationship difficulties, because they trust my opinion.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Votre réponse est un peu désorganisée et manque de fluidité. Essayez d'utiliser des mots de liaison pour structurer vos idées et exprimer clairement vos attentes futures.
Exemplo: I hope my writing will change in the future; instead of essays, I would like to write more professional documents like contracts and emails to my colleagues, which I think will be more interesting.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des phrases plus courtes et des mots de liaison pour mieux organiser vos idées.
Exemplo: I prefer typing because the lecturer speaks quickly, making it hard to keep up by hand. Also, typing full sentences helps me learn better, so handwriting is too slow for me.
Gramática
× I enjoy writing detailed responses to my friend's personal problems because they often come to me for advice on psychological issues.
✓ I enjoy writing detailed responses to my friends' personal problems because they often come to me for advice on psychological issues.
The preposition 'to' is correct, but the possessive form 'friend's' should be plural possessive 'friends'' because it refers to multiple friends. This is a singular and plural issue, but since the problem type list does not have a specific ID for possessive plural, the closest is 'Incorrect use of prepositions' (ID 11). The correction is to use the plural possessive form to match the meaning.
× As instance, when they face challenging regarding relationship difficulties, I give them my opinion, yes.
✓ For instance, when they face challenges regarding relationship difficulties, I give them my opinion, yes.
The phrase 'As instance' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'For instance'. Also, 'challenging' is an adjective and should be the noun 'challenges' here. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word form. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
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