Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答不够自然，表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，且内容不够具体。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误，并且补充具体细节。

Exemplo: I don't write much these days because I use my phone and laptop for most of my university work. Typing is more convenient and faster for me than handwriting.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语句不连贯，缺少清晰的主题句和具体细节。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连词补充具体原因和细节，保持句子流畅。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I liked writing in my diary to express my emotions and record daily events. However, since entering university, I write less often because I am busier.

Sugestão: 回答含糊且重复，缺乏逻辑和具体内容。建议明确表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并提供具体的变化内容。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe what I write has changed as I have grown older. In childhood, I wrote diaries about my feelings, but now I mostly write academic notes and emails.

Sugestão: 回答较为简洁但表达不够流畅，存在语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并补充具体原因使回答更丰富。

Exemplo: I prefer typing because I am used to completing my university assignments electronically. Typing is faster and more convenient than handwriting for me.

× Honestly, I don't read a lot, write a lot nowadays things.

✓ Honestly, I don't read or write a lot of things nowadays.

这里的“things”是可数名词，前面需要有数量词或限定词修饰，且“write a lot nowadays things”语序不正确，应调整为“write a lot of things nowadays”。

× I am doing my university course with paperless phone, so I think it is more convenient to type instead of writing.

✓ I am doing my university course with a paperless phone, so I think it is more convenient to type instead of write.

“with paperless phone”缺少冠词“a”，应为“with a paperless phone”。“instead of writing”中“instead of”后面应接动名词或动词原形，这里“write”更合适。

× Umm, umm, in my childhood, I usual, I usually I use it to write my emotions in my diary to record the things happened and the feelings what I had.

✓ Umm, umm, in my childhood, I usually used it to write my emotions in my diary to record the things that happened and the feelings I had.

“usual”应为副词“usually”。“use”时态应与“in my childhood”对应，改为过去式“used”。“the things happened”缺少关系代词“that”。“the feelings what I had”中“what”应改为“that”或省略。

× Uh, however, when I get in, when I entered the university, uh, most of time.

✓ Uh, however, when I entered the university, most of the time.

“when I get in”时态不对，应为过去式“when I entered”。“most of time”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“most of the time”。

× Umm, actually, I don't know. I think I, I think what I quite well changed, uh, with the, with a, with my age.

✓ Umm, actually, I don't know. I think I have quite well changed with my age.

“I think what I quite well changed”结构不正确，去掉“what”，并用现在完成时“have changed”表示变化。

× Umm, when I, I usually, I used to, I used to, umm, write Diaries in my childhood.

✓ Umm, when I was a child, I usually used to write diaries.

“when I”后面缺少谓语，应补充“was a child”表示时间。“used to”后面接动词原形“write”。“Diaries”不需要大写。

× Things are I think I'm accustomed to finishing my university course with paperless form.

✓ I think I am accustomed to finishing my university course in a paperless form.

原句语序混乱，应调整为“I think I am accustomed to...”。“with paperless form”应改为“in a paperless form”。

× I prefer typing instead of writing because I think it is more convenient.

✓ I prefer typing instead of writing because I think it is more convenient.

此句语法正确，无需修改。