Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然流畅，语法和表达存在错误，且内容较为冗长且不够聚焦。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，直接回答问题并用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: No, I don't write a lot. Instead, I prefer capturing moments with my camera to record beautiful things in my life. Sometimes, I express my feelings by talking to others rather than writing.

Sugestão: 回答内容混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性。建议使用清晰的句子结构，明确说明写作内容和原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I like to write diaries and journals about my daily life, such as what I eat, the people I meet, and our conversations. This helps me reflect on my experiences and plan for the future.

Sugestão: 回答表达较为混乱，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe what I write can change over time because life is always moving forward. However, writing helps me cherish precious memories and reflect on my experiences.

Sugestão: 回答冗长且表达不清，语法和逻辑不够连贯。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，使用连接词使句子流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer typing on smart devices because it's faster and I can easily share my thoughts with photos on social media. Also, my handwriting is not very neat, so typing suits me better.

× I I'm not a person that like to write everything down till I recorded that.

✓ I I'm not a person that likes to write everything down till I recorded that.

这里的主语是单数形式的"person"，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式"likes"，而不是复数形式"like"。

× I like to just snapping some things with my cameras or my films recorded the daily like beautiful things happen in my life or like I express my feelings of some issues by talking to the others.

✓ I like to just snap some things with my cameras or my films recording the daily beautiful things that happen in my life or I express my feelings about some issues by talking to others.

动词"like"后面接不定式"to snap"，而不是动名词"snapping"。此外，"films recorded"应改为"films recording"，表示正在进行的动作。"talking to the others"中的"the"不必要，应去掉。

× stories like that.

✓ stories like that.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× especially related with like what I eat today and what I meant and which kind of people I met or like what we talked and what this effect of my future plans or not, stories like that.

✓ especially related to what I ate today, what I meant, which kind of people I met, what we talked about, and whether this affects my future plans or not, stories like that.

"related with"应改为"related to"，"what I meant"应为过去式"ate"，"what we talked"后应加介词"about"，"what this effect of my future plans or not"表达不清，应改为"whether this affects my future plans or not"。

× what I eat today and what I meant and which kind of people I met

✓ what I ate today and what I meant and which kind of people I met

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式，"eat"应改为"ate"。

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

这里表达对未来的推测，应该用"will"而不是"would"。

× The thing is very easy to to change the situation of every aspects of everything.

✓ The thing is very easy to change the situation of every aspect of everything.

"to to change"重复，应去掉一个"to"。"every aspects"应为单数"every aspect"。

× every aspects of everything.

✓ every aspect of everything.

"every"后应接单数名词，故"aspects"应改为"aspect"。

× So but I think the point like we write it down is just to cherish those and make them precious memories.

✓ So, but I think the point is that when we write it down, it's just to cherish those and make them precious memories.

句子结构不完整，缺少连接词"that"和"when"，使句子更通顺。

× So but I think the point like we write it down is just to cherish those and make them precious memories.

✓ But I think the point is that when we write it down, it's just to cherish those and make them precious memories.

"So but"连用不合适，应去掉"So"或"but"中的一个。

× Well, when I'm writing, I prefer to type on the smart devices and which related to my mood and this will be posted by me by me on my social media and formed with some beautiful content with my with the photo I snapped or since I'm not a person that can write, you know, good looking characters, so I avoid doing that.

✓ Well, when I'm writing, I prefer to type on smart devices, which relates to my mood, and this will be posted by me on my social media and formed with some beautiful content with the photos I snapped. Since I'm not a person who can write, you know, good-looking characters, I avoid doing that.

"which related to"应为"which relates to"，"by me by me"重复，应去掉一个。"with my with the photo"结构混乱，应简化为"with the photos"。"person that"改为"person who"更合适。

× good looking characters

✓ good-looking characters

复合形容词"good-looking"应用连字符连接。