Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and overly complex expressions. Use simpler phrases and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence followed by a brief explanation.

Exemplo: No, I don't write a lot because I find it challenging and time-consuming. I usually prefer other activities instead.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating previous answers and filler words like 'uh'. Directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I don't enjoy writing much, so I don't have a favorite topic. However, I enjoy reading various genres such as science fiction, fiction, and nonfiction because they broaden my knowledge.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating phrases and unclear expressions. Provide a direct answer with a clear topic sentence and explain your opinion with specific reasons or examples to enrich your response.

Exemplo: Since I rarely write, I don't expect my writing style to change much. But if I practiced more, I believe I could improve over time.

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetitive phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, tools like Grammarly help correct grammar mistakes and suggest better vocabulary, which improves my writing quality.

× I would prefer to do anything else if I'm being candid with you.

✓ I would prefer to do anything else if I am being candid with you.

The contraction 'I'm' is acceptable in spoken English, but in formal or written contexts, it is better to use the full form 'I am' for clarity and formality.

× What do you like to write?

✓ What do you like writing?

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when referring to activities, so 'like writing' is more natural than 'like to write' in this context.

× Uh, so there is nothing much I particularly like to write about, but I do like reading, and I love reading about science fiction, fiction, even nonfiction.

✓ Uh, so there is not much I particularly like to write about, but I do like reading, and I love reading about science fiction, fiction, even nonfiction.

The phrase 'nothing much' is less natural here; 'not much' is the correct quantifier to express a small amount or degree.

× A variety of genres are interesting to me.

✓ A variety of genres is interesting to me.

The phrase 'a variety of' is treated as singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'.

× As I mentioned before, I don't write and I'm quite confused about what would change about my writing if I do not particularly particularly write a lot.

✓ As I mentioned before, I don't write and I'm quite confused about what would change about my writing if I do not particularly write a lot.

The repetition of 'particularly' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× So I don't think so.

✓ So I don't think it will change.

The phrase 'I don't think so' is vague; specifying 'I don't think it will change' clarifies the meaning in response to the question about change.

× There are many benefits that comes with the typing on a computer.

✓ There are many benefits that come with typing on a computer.

The subject 'benefits' is plural, so the verb should be 'come' instead of 'comes'. Also, 'the typing' is incorrect; 'typing' without 'the' is correct.

× There are many benefits that comes with the typing on a computer.

✓ There are many benefits that come with typing on a computer.

The article 'the' before 'typing' is unnecessary; 'typing' as a gerund does not require an article here.

× Uh Grammarly being one of one major one on major benefits because it auto corrects any mistakes you might have.

✓ Uh, Grammarly is one of the major benefits because it autocorrects any mistakes you might have.

The sentence lacks a verb; adding 'is' clarifies the subject. Also, 'auto corrects' should be 'autocorrects' as one word. The phrase 'one of one major one on major benefits' is incorrect and should be 'one of the major benefits'.

× Whether it being grammar, it might even give you suggestions for better vocabulary.

✓ Whether it is grammar, it might even give you suggestions for better vocabulary.

The phrase 'Whether it being grammar' is incorrect; it should be 'Whether it is grammar' to use the correct verb form after 'whether'.