Writing— Part 1 Relatório
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Part 1
Examinador
Do you write a lot?
Candidato
Yes, I'm studying so I usually write my note.
Examinador
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidato
I often write notes when I study or work because writing things down helps me remember important information. For example, I usually jot down key points in my notebooks so that I can easily refer back to them whenever I got forget something.
Examinador
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidato
Absolutely yes. I believe that the things I write will definitely change over time because the world is always evolving. In the future, people might read my writing to understand what life was like in the past or at the moment.
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidato
Personally, I enjoy both typing and handwriting because they serve different proposals. When I am working on my computer, I prefer typing as is is faster and more convenient. However, when I study or take notes, I like writing my hand in my notebook.
Avaliação
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Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'write my note' nên là 'write my notes'. Bạn cũng nên mở rộng câu trả lời để làm rõ hơn về thói quen viết của mình, tránh trả lời quá ngắn.
Exemplo: Yes, I write quite a lot because I am a student. I usually take notes during lectures and when I study to help me remember important information.
What do you like to write? Why?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như 'whenever I got forget something' nên là 'whenever I forget something'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: I like to write notes when I study or work because it helps me remember important details. For instance, I jot down key points in my notebooks so I can easily review them later if I forget anything.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt với ý tưởng rõ ràng và liên kết hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên tránh dùng từ 'absolutely yes' mà có thể dùng 'definitely' hoặc 'certainly' để tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu cuối có thể chỉnh sửa để rõ ràng hơn.
Exemplo: Definitely, I think the things I write will change over time because the world is constantly evolving. In the future, people might read my writings to learn about life in the past.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đầy đủ ý nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'serve different proposals' nên là 'serve different purposes', 'writing my hand' nên là 'writing by hand'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Exemplo: I enjoy both typing and handwriting because they serve different purposes. When I work on my computer, I prefer typing since it is faster and more convenient. However, when I study or take notes, I like writing by hand in my notebook.
Gramática
× Yes, I'm studying so I usually write my note.
✓ Yes, I'm studying so I usually write my notes.
The word 'note' should be plural 'notes' because it refers to multiple pieces of writing taken during study. In English, when referring to multiple items, the plural form is required.
× I usually jot down key points in my notebooks so that I can easily refer back to them whenever I got forget something.
✓ I usually jot down key points in my notebooks so that I can easily refer back to them whenever I forget something.
The phrase 'got forget' is incorrect. The correct form is 'forget' because the sentence is in the present tense referring to a habitual action. Using 'got' here is unnecessary and grammatically incorrect.
× Personally, I enjoy both typing and handwriting because they serve different proposals.
✓ Personally, I enjoy both typing and handwriting because they serve different purposes.
The word 'proposals' is incorrect in this context. The correct word is 'purposes' which means reasons or functions. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects the sentence meaning.
× However, when I study or take notes, I like writing my hand in my notebook.
✓ However, when I study or take notes, I like writing by hand in my notebook.
The phrase 'writing my hand' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'writing by hand' which means writing manually with a pen or pencil. This is a common idiomatic expression in English.
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