Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several language errors that affect naturalness and clarity. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct vocabulary. For example, instead of 'I ride fair amount' and 'K patrolling', you could say 'I write quite regularly' and 'I keep a journal'. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I write quite regularly. Although I'm not a professional writer, I keep a daily journal to reflect on my experiences and write weekly goals to monitor my personal growth.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unclear phrases and filler words like 'you know'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, explain what you mean by 'rated' and clarify how reviewing your journal helps you. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural.

Exemplo: I like to write in my journal every day because it helps me record my experiences and preserve memories. Moreover, I often review my entries after a few weeks to observe how I have changed over time.

Sugestão: Your answer shows understanding but has grammatical errors and unclear expressions such as 'reflect some man'. Try to use linking words to contrast ideas and be more precise. For example, explain how your mood affects your writing. Also, avoid filler words like 'like'.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. The content of my diary changes daily. For instance, when I'm in a good mood, my writing is upbeat, but on difficult days, my entries tend to be more serious and reflective.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing such as 'I turned to type' and 'I pray for handwriting'. Try to use more natural expressions and linking words to compare your preferences clearly. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes.

Exemplo: When I need to write something professional, I prefer typing because it's faster and allows easy access to online resources. However, for personal writing like diaries, I prefer handwriting since it feels more intimate and gives me time to reflect.

× I would say I ride fair amount.

✓ I would say I write a fair amount.

The word 'ride' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'write'. Also, 'fair amount' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I have the habit of K patrolling so then I can reflect on my daily life as well as I write my weekly resolution so I can keep track on my personal growth.

✓ I have the habit of note-taking so that I can reflect on my daily life, and I write my weekly resolutions so I can keep track of my personal growth.

The phrase 'K patrolling' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'note-taking' fits the context. Also, 'so then' is awkward; 'so that' is better. 'Keep track on' should be 'keep track of'. 'Weekly resolution' should be plural 'weekly resolutions' to match the context.

× Well, I just tried our journal on daily basis because it is a great way for me to, you know, check my daily experience and keep my memory stored.

✓ Well, I just try to journal on a daily basis because it is a great way for me to, you know, check my daily experiences and keep my memories stored.

'Tried our journal' is incorrect; it should be 'try to journal'. 'On daily basis' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Daily experience' should be plural 'daily experiences' to match the context. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories'.

× You know I have the habit of rated after a few weeks or a few months to save the changes I have made.

✓ You know I have the habit of reading after a few weeks or a few months to save the changes I have made.

'Rated' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'reading'. The sentence structure is awkward; 'reading' fits the context of reviewing past entries.

× The content of my diary changed every day and sometimes like I have a good mood and the whole writing was quite upbeat, but on the other days when I have some like difficulties, then the writing, it will reflect some man.

✓ The content of my diary changes every day. Sometimes when I am in a good mood, the whole writing is quite upbeat, but on other days when I have some difficulties, the writing reflects that mood.

The question is in present tense, so 'changed' should be 'changes'. 'Like I have a good mood' is awkward; 'when I am in a good mood' is better. 'Was' should be 'is' to maintain present tense. 'Reflect some man' is unclear; likely meant 'reflects that mood' or 'reflects my feelings'.

× Oh, I need to write something professional. Then I turned to type because it is more convenient to access all of their resources from Internet.

✓ Oh, when I need to write something professional, I turn to typing because it is more convenient to access all of the resources from the Internet.

'Then I turned to type' is past tense and awkward; 'I turn to typing' fits better. 'Their resources' is unclear; 'the resources' is better. 'From Internet' needs the article 'the' before 'Internet'.

× However, if I need to write something personal like diary or journal, then I pray for handwriting because it is more intimate and it allows me more time to reflect on things I read.

✓ However, if I need to write something personal like a diary or journal, then I prefer handwriting because it is more intimate and it allows me more time to reflect on things I have read.

'I pray for handwriting' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer handwriting'. 'Like diary or journal' needs the article 'a' before 'diary'. 'Things I read' should be 'things I have read' to indicate past experience.