Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, directly state your habit and reasons for writing daily, and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I write every day because it is one of my favorite hobbies. Also, since I am pursuing my degree, I need to write a lot for my assignments. Therefore, writing has become a part of my daily routine.

Sugestão: Focus on organizing your answer with clear sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I enjoy writing stories because it allows me to be creative. Additionally, I keep a diary, which helps me improve my language skills and vocabulary. Writing assignments is also important for my education, and I like to write whenever I have free time.

Sugestão: Clarify your answer by using correct tenses and sentence structure. Explain your opinion clearly and provide reasons to support it. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I don't think the things I write will change because I usually write stories based on my past experiences, which cannot be changed by anyone.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and complete sentences. Clearly state your preference and reasons, and avoid unclear phrases.

Exemplo: I mostly prefer handwriting because it feels more personal. However, I also like typing on a keyboard because typed letters are clearer and easier to read than handwritten ones.

× Yes, I do have a habit of writing every day is one of my favorite hobby whenever I get attacked and moreover, as I'm doing my bearded degree, I heart I have to write more about education and my assignments.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of writing every day; it is one of my favorite hobbies whenever I get time. Moreover, as I'm doing my bachelor's degree, I think I have to write more about education and my assignments.

The original sentence is a run-on with multiple ideas improperly connected, causing confusion. 'Do have' is unnecessary here; 'have' suffices. 'Every day is one of my favorite hobby' mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly and lacks proper connection. 'Whenever I get attacked' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'whenever I get time'. 'Bearded degree' is incorrect; the correct term is 'bachelor's degree'. 'I heart' should be 'I think'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do have a habit of writing every day is one of my favorite hobby whenever I get attacked and moreover, as I'm doing my bearded degree, I heart I have to write more about education and my assignments.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of writing every day; it is one of my favorite hobbies whenever I get time. Moreover, as I'm doing my bachelor's degree, I think I have to write more about education and my assignments.

The phrase 'one of my favorite hobby' incorrectly uses the singular 'hobby' instead of the plural 'hobbies' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, 'assignments' is correctly plural here, matching the context.

× Yes, I do have a habit of writing every day is one of my favorite hobby whenever I get attacked and moreover, as I'm doing my bearded degree, I heart I have to write more about education and my assignments.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of writing every day; it is one of my favorite hobbies whenever I get time. Moreover, as I'm doing my bachelor's degree, I think I have to write more about education and my assignments.

The phrase 'writing every day is one of my favorite hobby whenever I get attacked' misuses 'attacked' instead of 'time' or 'chance'. The preposition 'about' is correctly used with 'write more about education'.

× I like to write stories I'm a story writer and I do have a happy to write in Diaries is one of the most good habit of me that improve my language and capacity to write under way It improvement vocabulary and I like to ride my assignment is such a part of my education and whenever I get leisure time, I like to.

✓ I like to write stories; I'm a story writer. I have a habit of writing in diaries, which is one of my best habits that improves my language and my capacity to write. It improves my vocabulary. I like to write my assignments as they are part of my education, and whenever I get leisure time, I like to write.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'do have a happy' should be 'have a habit'; 'in Diaries' should be 'in diaries'; 'most good habit' should be 'best habit'; 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with singular subject; 'capacity to write under way It improvement vocabulary' is unclear and corrected to 'capacity to write' and 'improves my vocabulary'; 'ride my assignment' should be 'write my assignments'; 'is such a part' corrected to 'are part'; sentence fragments are joined properly for clarity.

× I like to write stories I'm a story writer and I do have a happy to write in Diaries is one of the most good habit of me that improve my language and capacity to write under way It improvement vocabulary and I like to ride my assignment is such a part of my education and whenever I get leisure time, I like to.

✓ I like to write stories; I'm a story writer. I have a habit of writing in diaries, which is one of my best habits that improves my language and my capacity to write. It improves my vocabulary. I like to write my assignments as they are part of my education, and whenever I get leisure time, I like to write.

The phrase 'most good habit' is incorrect; 'best habit' is the correct superlative form. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context. 'Diaries' is plural and correctly used here.

× I don't think so. I like to write the stories at that, that happened in my past, at the past. Couldn't happen, couldn't change for anyone.

✓ I don't think so. I like to write stories that happened in my past. They couldn't happen again and couldn't be changed by anyone.

The phrase 'at that, that happened in my past, at the past' is awkward and redundant; simplified to 'stories that happened in my past'. 'Couldn't happen' is incomplete; adding 'again' clarifies meaning. 'Couldn't change for anyone' is corrected to 'couldn't be changed by anyone' for proper passive construction and clarity.

× Mostly I prefer writing by my own hand or they've desert Constance is not favorable. I like to use keyboards to type and the benefits the advantages of. Typing overwriting is that typing letters are very clear compared to the writing.

✓ Mostly, I prefer writing by my own hand, or when the internet connection is not favorable. I like to use keyboards to type. The benefits and advantages of typing are that typed letters are very clear compared to handwriting.

'Writing by my own hand' is acceptable but 'they've desert Constance' is a mishearing or typo for 'the internet connection'. 'Typing overwriting' is incorrect; corrected to 'typing'. 'Compared to the writing' is vague; corrected to 'compared to handwriting' for clarity.