Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific details with clear linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: I don't write very often, but I keep a diary where I record my daily routine and memorable events. This helps me remember important moments in my life.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to explain why you like writing poetry and diary entries. Use specific vocabulary and correct sentence structure to make your ideas easier to understand.

Exemplo: I like writing poetry because it allows me to express my thoughts and feelings creatively. Additionally, I write about daily events to keep track of my life experiences.

Sugestão: Your response is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. To improve, answer directly and use linking words to explain how your writing changes with your experiences. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my writing changes as I gain more life experience. When I was younger, I wrote simple pieces, but now I include deeper thoughts and reflections.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and has many errors. To improve, clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words and correct grammar. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting over typing because it's more convenient. I can easily carry my diary and write whenever I want, which helps me keep track of my thoughts.

× Not very frequent but sometime I write a diary where I write to my daily routine or sometime the incident happened with me which is very mesmerising or very important to my heart.

✓ Not very frequently but sometimes I write a diary where I write about my daily routine or sometimes the incidents that happen to me which are very mesmerising or very important to my heart.

The adverb 'frequent' should be 'frequently' to correctly modify the verb. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate occasional actions. 'Write to my daily routine' is incorrect; it should be 'write about my daily routine' because we write about topics. 'Incident happened' should be 'incidents that happen' to maintain present tense and plural form matching. 'Incident' should be plural 'incidents' to match the context.

× I write down on my diary for just remembering all this incident.

✓ I write down in my diary just to remember all these incidents.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'diary'; it should be 'in' because we write inside a diary. 'For just remembering' is awkward; 'just to remember' is more natural. 'This incident' should be plural 'these incidents' to match the context.

× Sometime I write to the poetry which is really help me to express my thinking or my view towards the life by in the way of words so and sometimes I write that my daily incident or a moment which is really helped me to track my life situations.

✓ Sometimes I write poetry which really helps me to express my thoughts or my views towards life through words, and sometimes I write about my daily incidents or moments which really help me to track my life situations.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Write to the poetry' is incorrect; it should be 'write poetry' without 'to the'. 'Is really help' should be 'really helps' to agree with singular subject 'poetry'. 'My thinking or my view towards the life' should be 'my thoughts or my views towards life' for natural expression. 'By in the way of words so' is incorrect and should be 'through words'. 'Write that my daily incident' should be 'write about my daily incidents' to use correct preposition and plural form. 'Is really helped' should be 'really help' to agree with plural subject 'incidents or moments'.

× Yes, Sir, definitely when you write to something it writing is also grew up with your experience or your way of way of life lifestyle.

✓ Yes, Sir, definitely when you write something, your writing also grows with your experience or your way of life.

'Write to something' is incorrect; it should be 'write something' without 'to'. 'It writing is also grew up' is incorrect; it should be 'your writing also grows' to use present tense and correct verb form. 'Way of way of life lifestyle' is redundant; 'way of life' is sufficient.

× When I was younger, I write something simple or like this, but when I was now a grew up or become older, so I write my experience or my thought, my words is.

✓ When I was younger, I wrote something simple like this, but now that I have grown up or become older, I write about my experiences or my thoughts; my words have changed.

'I write' should be past tense 'I wrote' to match 'when I was younger'. 'I was now a grew up' is incorrect; it should be 'now that I have grown up'. 'My experience or my thought' should be plural 'experiences or thoughts' to match context. 'My words is' is incorrect; it should be 'my words have changed' or similar to complete the sentence meaningfully.

× Generally, I write to I prefer to writing as compared to type because it's a it's a very easiest inconvenience.

✓ Generally, I prefer writing to typing because it's much easier and more convenient.

'I write to I prefer to writing' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'I prefer writing to typing'. 'As compared to type' should be 'to typing' for correct comparison. 'It's a it's a very easiest inconvenience' is incorrect; 'easiest' is a superlative and 'inconvenience' is negative, so it should be 'much easier and more convenient'.

× We becaused by this way you can write on diary, writing diary so you can carry it with you with you, which is really help to help you in your life.

✓ Because of this, you can write in a diary, so you can carry it with you, which really helps you in your life.

'We becaused by this way' is incorrect; it should be 'Because of this'. 'Write on diary' should be 'write in a diary'. 'Writing diary' is redundant and incorrect here. 'Carry it with you with you' repeats 'with you' unnecessarily. 'Which is really help to help you' should be 'which really helps you' for correct verb form and clarity.