WritingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you write a lot?

Candidato

Yes, of course, some writing some papers about my major endemic. You know I have to write to a plenty of word 2. Remind my competence.

Examinador

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidato

I will write about my rated major like lawyers specifically criminal procedure Lords and some are bad treated kisses to set my tutors and who and he will can correct am I.

Examinador

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidato

Yes, course you know my major is the Lords pass vehicle equipment procedural or which is a coning his enhanced always the modding sietes and you know coastal or is will be updated from time to time. So my paper is about.

Examinador

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidato

I prefer to typing in my laptop rather than handwriting in the papers. I think the former ease so community for me in the it's not with the man life and I think is speed is so far so I do really like type.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯,语法和词汇使用错误较多,表达不清晰。建议加强基础语法和词汇的学习,回答时注意句子结构,避免重复和无意义的词汇。

Exemplo: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially academic papers related to my major. This helps me improve my writing skills and deepen my understanding of the subject.

What do you like to write? Why?

Pontuação: 30.0

Sugestão: 回答内容混乱,表达不清楚,缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议练习用简单明了的句子表达自己的观点,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Exemplo: I like to write about my major, especially topics related to criminal law, because it helps me learn more and get feedback from my tutors.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Pontuação: 25.0

Sugestão: 回答语法错误严重,内容表达不清晰,缺乏具体细节。建议多练习表达观点时的句子结构,使用具体例子说明观点。

Exemplo: Yes, the content I write changes because laws and procedures are updated regularly, so I need to keep my papers current.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和词汇错误,表达不够自然。建议练习使用正确的句型和词汇,表达清晰的理由,并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer typing on my laptop because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting. It also makes it easier to edit my work.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× some writing some papers about my major endemic.

some writing some papers about my major endemic.

该句中'some writing some papers'结构不清晰,可能是复数和单数混用问题,但因句子整体语义不明确,无法准确判断复数单数错误。建议明确表达数量关系。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I have to write to a plenty of word 2.

I have to write plenty of words.

'a plenty of'是不正确的用法,正确表达是'plenty of',且'word'应为复数'words'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I will write about my rated major like lawyers specifically criminal procedure Lords and some are bad treated kisses to set my tutors and who and he will can correct am I.

I will write about my related major, like law, specifically criminal procedure laws, and some badly treated cases to show my tutors, and they can correct me.

句子中代词使用混乱,'he will can correct am I'语法错误,正确应为'they can correct me'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× my major is the Lords pass vehicle equipment procedural or which is a coning his enhanced always the modding sietes and you know coastal or is will be updated from time to time.

My major is the law's procedural equipment, which is constantly enhanced and updated from time to time.

形容词和名词搭配错误,句子结构混乱,需调整形容词顺序和名词形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to typing in my laptop rather than handwriting in the papers.

I prefer typing on my laptop rather than handwriting on paper.

'to typing'应为动名词形式'typing',介词应为'on my laptop'和'on paper'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think the former ease so community for me in the it's not with the man life and I think is speed is so far so I do really like type.

I think the former is easier and more convenient for me in daily life, and I think its speed is much faster, so I really like typing.

形容词和副词使用错误,句子结构混乱,需调整词序和用词以表达清晰。

Vocabulário

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