Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免冗余，并注意语法正确。

Exemplo: No, I didn't write much before because I found it difficult, especially in Chinese and English. However, now I have changed and try to write more often.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够流畅，句子结构混乱。建议使用清晰的句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Nowadays, I prefer writing essays or short articles because they help me improve my learning and express my ideas more clearly.

Sugestão: 回答内容较为简单，语法和词汇使用有待提高。建议丰富细节，使用更准确的词汇和句型。

Exemplo: Yes, my writing has changed a lot. When I was young, my writing was simple and naive, but now I write longer essays that include more detailed information and knowledge.

Sugestão: 回答中有多处语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁表达偏好，并说明原因，注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think better. Also, I'm not good at typing, so it is slower and more difficult for me.

× No, I really hate to writing an right to lodge because when this was more I really hate to learn Chinese or English because I think it is quite difficult for me.

✓ No, I really hate writing and right to lodge because when this was more I really hate learning Chinese or English because I think it is quite difficult for me.

动词hate后面应接动名词形式writing和learning，而不是不定式to writing或to learn。

× Maybe nowadays I'm more likely to write the essay or some point she because it can improve myself in my learning and also it can help me to express my idea is better and I'm more likely to write them before.

✓ Maybe nowadays I'm more likely to write essays or some points because it can improve myself in my learning and also it can help me to express my ideas better and I'm more likely to write them than before.

essay和point应使用复数形式essays和points，因为这里指的是泛指的多篇文章和多个观点。idea也应为复数形式ideas。

× Maybe nowadays I'm more likely to write the essay or some point she because it can improve myself in my learning and also it can help me to express my idea is better and I'm more likely to write them before.

✓ Maybe nowadays I'm more likely to write essays or some points because it can improve me in my learning and also it can help me to express my ideas better and I'm more likely to write them than before.

myself用法不当，应该用me作为宾语。表达“improve myself”应改为“improve me”。

× I'm more likely to writing the cause. I like to ride, it can help me to use my brain more better and also I'm not good at typing so.

✓ I'm more likely to write because I like to write; it can help me to use my brain better and also I'm not good at typing.

more better是错误的比较级表达，better本身就是比较级，不需要more修饰。writing应改为write，ride应改为write。

× I'm more likely to writing the cause. I like to ride, it can help me to use my brain more better and also I'm not good at typing so.

✓ I'm more likely to write because I like to write; it can help me to use my brain better and also I'm not good at typing.

动词like后面应接不定式或动名词，这里应使用不定式write而非ride。

× Of course, it will always be changed, just like what I write before when I was small and the thing that it says quite simple and foolish.

✓ Of course, it will always change, just like what I wrote before when I was small and the things that I said were quite simple and foolish.

write的过去式是wrote，say的过去式是said，且things应为复数。

× But nowadays I changed.

✓ But nowadays I have changed.

changed后应使用完成时态have changed，表示从过去到现在的变化。

× But nowadays I will write more assay or long articles, so it will include more knowledge than before.

✓ But nowadays I will write more essays or long articles, so there will be more knowledge included than before.

表达“会包含更多知识”时，应使用there be结构，表示存在更多知识。

× But nowadays I will write more assay or long articles, so it will include more knowledge than before.

✓ But nowadays I will write more essays or long articles, so it will include more knowledge than before.

assay拼写错误，应为essays，且应使用复数形式。

× I'm more likely to writing the cause. I like to ride, it can help me to use my brain more better and also I'm not good at typing so. I used a computer.

✓ I'm more likely to write because I like to write; it can help me to use my brain better and also I'm not good at typing. I use a computer.

used应改为现在时use，符合上下文时态。