Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot, especially at work. I take many notes to keep my tasks organized, which helps me prioritize projects effectively. This way, I know exactly which project to focus on first.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about how writing plans helps you.

Exemplo: I like to write plans because putting them on paper helps me organize my thoughts and prioritize tasks properly. Additionally, I write my daily schedule to keep a clear mind about what I need to do and where I should be.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on using correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, try to explain your ideas logically with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I think the things I write will change as my work responsibilities expand. Currently, I write only about my own projects, but in the future, I might help juniors with their documents or participate in cross-team writing tasks.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar errors. Use precise vocabulary and correct sentence structure. Also, explain your reasons clearly and logically with linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because the text is clear and I can adjust the font size. Moreover, typing on a laptop or phone is more portable, so I can carry my notes with me everywhere.

× I read alot notes to help me keep all my work items organized and it helped me prioritize different projects so I can have a clear order about a witch project I should do first.

✓ I read a lot of notes to help me keep all my work items organized and it helped me prioritize different projects so I can have a clear order about which project I should do first.

The phrase 'alot' is incorrect; the correct form is 'a lot of' when referring to a large quantity. Also, 'witch' is a misspelling of 'which'. Using 'a lot of' properly quantifies 'notes'.

× I read alot notes to help me keep all my work items organized and it helped me prioritize different projects so I can have a clear order about a witch project I should do first.

✓ I read a lot of notes to help me keep all my work items organized and it helped me prioritize different projects so I can have a clear order about which project I should do first.

The pronoun 'a witch project' is incorrect; it should be 'which project' to refer to the specific project to prioritize. 'Which' is the correct interrogative pronoun here.

× I like to write about plans because writing plans down paper helping me organize my thoughts and help me throw out a proper prioritization in orders.

✓ I like to write about plans because writing plans down on paper helps me organize my thoughts and helps me create a proper prioritization in order.

The preposition 'down paper' is incorrect; it should be 'down on paper' to indicate the medium. Also, 'helping' should be 'helps' to agree with the subject, and 'throw out' is incorrect in this context; 'create' or 'make' is more appropriate. 'In orders' should be 'in order'.

× I like to write about plans because writing plans down paper helping me organize my thoughts and help me throw out a proper prioritization in orders.

✓ I like to write about plans because writing plans down on paper helps me organize my thoughts and helps me create a proper prioritization in order.

The verb 'helping' is incorrectly used; it should be 'helps' to match the present tense and singular subject 'writing plans down on paper'. Similarly, 'help' should be 'helps' for subject-verb agreement.

× Also, I like to write down my daily schedule so I had a clear mind about what I should do and where should I do those.

✓ Also, I like to write down my daily schedule so I have a clear mind about what I should do and where I should do those.

The phrase 'had a clear mind' is past tense, inconsistent with the present tense context; it should be 'have a clear mind'. Also, the question form 'where should I do those' is incorrect in this statement; it should be 'where I should do those'.

× Also, I like to write down my daily schedule so I had a clear mind about what I should do and where should I do those.

✓ Also, I like to write down my daily schedule so I have a clear mind about what I should do and where I should do those.

The verb 'had' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'have' to maintain consistency.

× Yes, I believe was Maya working scope expanded.

✓ Yes, I believe Maya's working scope has expanded.

The sentence is missing the subject 'Maya's' possessive form and the verb tense is incorrect. 'Was' is unnecessary; the present perfect 'has expanded' correctly indicates a change that has occurred.

× My writing content will be changed allowed.

✓ My writing content will be changed accordingly.

The word 'allowed' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'accordingly' to indicate that changes will happen as a result of the expanded scope.

× Maybe someday I will need to get other juniors to write their documents or participating son cross team writing document.

✓ Maybe someday I will need to get other juniors to write their documents or participate in cross-team writing documents.

The phrase 'participating son cross team writing document' is incorrect. It should be 'participate in cross-team writing documents'. 'Son' is a typo for 'on' or 'in', and 'participating' should be 'participate' to match the verb form after 'or'.

× I prefer typing because the top towards are clear and I can choose the size of the font.

✓ I prefer typing because the top fonts are clear and I can choose the size of the font.

The phrase 'top towards' is unclear and likely a typo. It should be 'fonts' or 'text' to refer to what is clear when typing.

× Also, typing on a laptop or cell phone is more portable so I can carry my notes in plants everywhere.

✓ Also, typing on a laptop or cell phone is more portable so I can carry my notes on plans everywhere.

The phrase 'carry my notes in plants everywhere' is incorrect. Likely intended 'carry my notes on plans everywhere' or 'carry my notes on devices everywhere'. 'In plants' is a prepositional error or typo.