Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I write a lot because I study political science, which requires extensive academic research. Besides that, I enjoy writing about history." This will make your answer more effective and easier to understand.

Exemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I study political science, which requires extensive academic research. Besides that, I enjoy writing about the history of different countries.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, say "I like to write daily journals because it helps me reflect on my day. Additionally, I write academic research papers as part of my studies." This will improve clarity and coherence.

Exemplo: I like to write daily journals because it helps me reflect on my day. Additionally, I write academic research papers as part of my studies in political science.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example, say "Yes, I believe my writing has changed over time. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my style and ideas evolve. For instance, when I was younger, my writing was simple, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively."

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my writing has changed over time. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my style and ideas evolve. For instance, when I was younger, my writing was simple, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to say "I prefer typing because handwriting tires my hand. Also, typing on a computer or mobile keyboard is more convenient for me, so I enjoy it more than handwriting." This will make your answer more effective and easier to understand.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because handwriting tires my hand. Also, typing on a computer or mobile keyboard is more convenient for me, so I enjoy it more than handwriting.

× Yes, I actually write aloud becauses my measure is political science.

✓ Yes, I actually write a lot because my major is political science.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'measure' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'major'. The sentence also uses 'aloud' incorrectly; it should be 'a lot' to indicate frequency.

× And as you know, political science requires a lot of research or academic research.

✓ And as you know, political science requires a lot of research, especially academic research.

The phrase 'or academic research' is awkward; 'especially academic research' better clarifies the meaning.

× So I write a lot because of that as well as I love writing and I love history and writing about history of any country.

✓ So I write a lot because of that, as well as because I love writing and I love history and writing about the history of any country.

The conjunction 'as well as' needs to be connected properly with 'because' to explain reasons. Also, 'history of any country' should be 'the history of any country' to specify.

× I like to write my daily Evans aura.

✓ I like to write my daily events or diary.

The phrase 'daily Evans aura' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling. It should be 'daily events or diary' to make sense.

× Any is something that I would love to write a Additionally, I like to write my academic research is that faculty are required for me.

✓ Anything is something that I would love to write. Additionally, I like to write my academic research as it is required by my faculty.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Any is something' should be 'Anything is something'. The second part needs restructuring for clarity and correct grammar.

× That's all I write.

✓ That's all I write.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× Yes, I believe the things I write already change overtime.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I write already change over time.

The phrase 'overtime' should be two words 'over time' meaning gradually. Also, 'already change' is acceptable but 'have already changed' would be better for present perfect tense.

× As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to invoke to evolve.

✓ As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to evolve.

The phrase 'tend to invoke to evolve' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'tend to evolve' meaning they develop over time.

× For example, when I was younger my writing was similar, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

✓ For example, when I was younger, my writing was simple, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'was similar' is vague; 'was simple' or 'was different' would be clearer. Also, a comma after 'younger' improves readability.

× I actually prefer typing becauses handwriting firing my hand and I also found its convertible for me to typing on the keyboard.

✓ I actually prefer typing because handwriting tires my hand and I also find it more convenient to type on the keyboard.

'Becauses' should be 'because'. 'Firing my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tires my hand'. 'Convertible' is incorrect here; 'convenient' is the right word. 'To typing' should be 'to type'.

× The wizard. It's BC keyboard or mobile keyboard so yeah I enjoy it more as an handwriting.

✓ Whether it's a PC keyboard or a mobile keyboard, I enjoy it more than handwriting.

'The wizard' is unclear and likely a mishearing. 'It's BC keyboard' should be 'it's a PC keyboard'. 'As an handwriting' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'more than handwriting'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.