Writing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy expressing my thoughts on paper. For example, I keep a journal where I write about my daily experiences and feelings.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more coherent and engaging.

Exemplo: I like to write down my dreams because I often have vivid and interesting ones. For instance, last week I dreamt about flying over a city, which was quite exciting.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear phrases and lacks specific supporting details. Try to clarify your ideas and provide reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I grow older because my interests and experiences will evolve. For example, I might write more about my career or family in the future.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and lacks detail. Try to use correct tense and expand your answer with reasons or comparisons to make it more complete.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting when I write because it helps me concentrate better. However, I know some people prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient.

× I am not right allows and.

✓ I am not very good at writing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It lacks a proper verb and subject agreement, making it a sentence structure error. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning using correct grammar and structure.

× I think.

✓ I think so.

The sentence 'I think.' is incomplete and sounds unnatural in this context. Adding 'so' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I really want to have a hope it to write a lot.

✓ I really want to have hope to write a lot.

The original sentence contains unnecessary words and incorrect structure. 'Have a hope it' is incorrect; 'have hope' is the correct phrase. Removing 'it' and adjusting the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I like to write down my dreams because I really dream a lot during the sleep and I think my dreams are really interesting.

✓ I like to write down my dreams because I dream a lot during sleep and I think my dreams are really interesting.

The phrase 'during the sleep' is incorrect; 'during sleep' is the correct form. Also, 'dream a lot' is correct without 'really' for clarity. The verb form is correct, but the preposition and article usage needed correction.

× Yes, I think it will change because you're South will change as you grow older.

✓ Yes, I think it will change because your thoughts will change as you grow older.

'You're South' is a mishearing or typo for 'your thoughts'. The pronoun 'your' is possessive and correctly refers to 'thoughts'. Correcting this clarifies the meaning and fixes the pronoun error.

× I prefer handwriting when I was writing.

✓ I prefer handwriting when I write.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'prefer' with past tense 'was writing'. To maintain tense consistency, 'was writing' should be changed to 'write' to match the present tense preference.

× And I know there are also people they prefer to tap.

✓ And I know there are also people who prefer to type.

The sentence is ungrammatical due to the redundant subject 'people they'. Also, 'tap' is incorrect in this context; 'type' is the correct verb for using a keyboard. The corrected sentence fixes these errors for clarity and grammar.