Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use varied vocabulary and add a brief specific example or reason. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they lift my mood and make my home feel welcoming. For example, seeing fresh roses on my kitchen table always makes me feel calm and happy.

Sugestão: Use a direct topic sentence and correct grammar. Provide specific details about what the person does with flowers and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother is a big flower lover. Whenever we receive flowers for celebrations, she arranges them in vases around the house and even presses petals to make homemade cards.

Sugestão: Avoid unrelated words and fix grammar. Give a clear statement then specific supporting detail, use linking words and keep it concise (no thanks at end).

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my father maintains a large front garden. As a result, we have roses, marigolds and jasmine that make the area colourful and pleasant.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and correct grammar. Start with a clear statement about your habit, then give a specific example and link to purpose (e.g. social media). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing flowers whenever I notice an interesting bloom. For instance, I recently photographed a rare purple orchid and posted it on my social media to share its unique colours with friends.

Sugestão: Be concise and precise. Provide one or two specific occasions and briefly explain the cultural meaning. Use correct grammar and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, people often give flowers for occasions like weddings, birthdays and funerals. For example, red roses are common for romantic occasions, while chrysanthemums are often used to express sympathy.

× Yes, I definitely love flowers because it gives me the emotions of fulfillment every time I see them.

✓ Yes, I definitely love flowers because they give me feelings of fulfillment every time I see them.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the pronoun and verb must be plural ('they give' not 'it gives'). Also 'emotions of fulfillment' is awkward; 'feelings of fulfillment' is natural. Suggestion: match pronoun/verb number to the noun and use natural collocations (feelings of fulfillment).

× It made me feel relaxed, relaxed and delightful.

✓ They make me feel relaxed and delighted.

Use present tense to match habitual feeling ('make' not 'made'). 'Delightful' describes something that causes delight; use 'delighted' to describe how the speaker feels. Avoid repeating 'relaxed'. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths and proper adjective forms for emotions.

× The world person who really loves flower is my mom.

✓ The person in the world who really loves flowers is my mom.

Word order was incorrect: 'the person in the world' is the correct phrase. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking generally. Suggestion: place modifiers in the correct order and pluralize general nouns.

× Every time we got the flowers in, whether any occasions or celebrations, she will use it and decorate it in our ways at home.

✓ Whenever we receive flowers for occasions or celebrations, she uses them to decorate our home in her own way.

Use 'whenever' or 'every time' with present simple for habitual actions. 'Got the flowers in' is informal and awkward; 'receive flowers' is clearer. 'Whether any occasions' is incorrect; specify 'for occasions or celebrations'. Pronoun 'it' must agree with plural 'flowers' so use 'them'. 'Decorate our home in her own way' is natural. Suggestion: use consistent tense and match pronouns to noun number.

× Yes, absolutely, as there are a garden in front of my house, my dad really loves to plant the trees and flowers to decorate my home to be more attractive and natural environmental friendly.

✓ Yes, absolutely. There is a garden in front of my house, and my dad really loves to plant trees and flowers to make our home more attractive and environmentally friendly.

Use 'there is' for a singular noun 'a garden' (not 'there are'). Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'trees' and 'flowers'. 'To be more attractive and natural environmental friendly' is ungrammatical; use 'more attractive and environmentally friendly.' Suggestion: use correct 'there is/are' with noun number and choose correct adverbial form 'environmentally friendly'.

× I'm the one who really love taking the photos, so every time I see anything that is beautiful and unique, I will capture it as soon as the flowers, which is very beautiful.

✓ I'm the one who really loves taking photos, so whenever I see something beautiful and unique, I capture it, such as a very beautiful flower.

Subject-verb agreement: 'who really loves' (third person singular relative). 'Taking the photos' -> 'taking photos' is more natural. 'Anything' -> 'something' is better with 'beautiful and unique'. 'I will capture it as soon as the flowers' is confused; rephrased to 'I capture it, such as a very beautiful flower.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement after relative pronoun and simplify phrasing.

× So I would love to capture it and use it and pose it in my social media.

✓ So I like to capture them and post them on my social media.

Pronoun 'it' does not agree with plural 'photos'—use 'them'. 'Use it and pose it' is incorrect; common verbs are 'post' or 'share' on social media. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for actions and match pronouns to plural nouns.

× Yes, of course, every time there is the occasions of celebrating, people in my country usually buy the flowers and give to others as the gift, because flowers represents the beautiful and the kindness in itself.

✓ Yes, of course. Whenever there are occasions to celebrate, people in my country usually buy flowers and give them to others as gifts, because flowers represent beauty and kindness.

Use 'there are' with plural 'occasions.' Omit unnecessary articles: 'buy flowers' not 'the flowers.' 'Give to others as the gift' -> 'give them to others as gifts.' 'Flowers represents' should be 'flowers represent' (plural subject-verb agreement). 'The beautiful and the kindness in itself' is awkward; use 'beauty and kindness.' Suggestion: correct subject-verb agreement, pluralization, and use natural noun phrases.