Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "on on her birthday larks tea". Try to keep your sentences clear and concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure correct pronouns and article usage. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much. I often give them to my friends and family on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. For example, I gave my husband a beautiful red rose on his birthday, and he really appreciated it.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repeating similar ideas without linking words. Try to add more specific details to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, my sister Sharma loves flowers very much. She has a diverse collection of flowers in her room and often gives them as gifts for various celebrations. Usually, she prefers to give roses because they are her favourite.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words like "dev umm" and incomplete sentences. Avoid hesitation and try to organise your ideas logically with linking words. Also, be specific about the types of flowers and activities related to them.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many different kinds of flowers in my neighbourhood, including roses and white lilies. People often come here to pick flowers to decorate their homes. For example, last week, I saw several people collecting flowers for this purpose.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear and relevant but could be more natural by avoiding awkward phrases like "I do take in cameras or photos". Use simpler and more natural expressions, and try to link your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life, especially when I see a beautiful one that catches my eye. For instance, two weeks ago, I was walking in the park and saw a stunning red rose, so I took a picture of it.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and incomplete ideas, such as "a banquet of red" which is unclear. Use correct verb tenses and complete your sentences. Also, provide specific examples with clear vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, in Nigeria, people often send flowers as gifts, especially for special occasions like anniversaries or birthdays. For example, on my anniversary last year, a friend sent me a beautiful bouquet of red roses.

× I like to give my friends and families flowers when they are celebrating anniversary or birthday.

✓ I like to give my friends and family flowers when they are celebrating an anniversary or a birthday.

The word 'families' should be singular 'family' because it refers to the collective family unit. Also, 'anniversary' and 'birthday' need the indefinite article 'an' and 'a' respectively because they are singular countable nouns here.

× For instance, I gave my husband a rose flower on on her birthday larks tea and she appreciated the.

✓ For instance, I gave my husband a rose on his birthday and he appreciated it.

The phrase 'rose flower' is redundant; 'rose' suffices. 'On on' is a repetition error. 'Her' should be 'his' to match 'husband'. 'Larks tea' is unclear and likely an error, so it is omitted for clarity. 'She appreciated the' is incomplete; it should be 'he appreciated it' to refer to the rose.

× Yes, my sister Sharma, she love flowers a lot.

✓ Yes, my sister Sharma loves flowers a lot.

The verb 'love' must agree with the singular third person subject 'my sister Sharma', so it should be 'loves'.

× In her room she have a different collection of flowers and she always gives people flowers.

✓ In her room she has a different collection of flowers and she always gives people flowers.

The verb 'have' must agree with the singular subject 'she', so it should be 'has'.

× She can give flowers for any celebration.

✓ She can give flowers for any celebration.

This sentence is correct; no modal verb error detected.

× Her gift is always giving roses.

✓ Her gift is always giving roses.

This sentence is acceptable as is; no singular/plural issue detected.

× Yes, there are dev umm diverse flowers in my estate such as roses, white flowers and people often come to this vicinity to block flowers for beautification of their houses.

✓ Yes, there are diverse flowers in my estate such as roses and white flowers, and people often come to this vicinity to buy flowers for beautification of their houses.

The word 'dev umm' appears to be filler and is removed. 'Block flowers' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'buy flowers' fits context better. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× For instance last week.

✓ For instance, last week.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb; it should be connected to the previous or following sentence for completeness.

× Absolutely. I do take in cameras or photos in my daily life, especially when I see a beautiful one that fascinates me.

✓ Absolutely. I do take photos in my daily life, especially when I see a beautiful one that fascinates me.

The phrase 'take in cameras or photos' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'take photos'. The preposition 'in' before 'cameras' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× For example, when I went to the park 2 weeks ago to have a walk around there, I saw a beautiful red rose and I took a picture of it.

✓ For example, when I went to the park 2 weeks ago to have a walk around, I saw a beautiful red rose and I took a picture of it.

The phrase 'walk around there' is redundant; 'walk around' suffices. The past tense verbs 'went', 'saw', and 'took' are correctly used.

× Yes, people in my country, Nigeria often sent flowers as a gift, most especially when they are celebrating a special event like anniversary or birthday.

✓ Yes, people in my country, Nigeria, often send flowers as gifts, especially when they are celebrating a special event like an anniversary or a birthday.

The verb 'sent' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so it should be 'send'. 'Most especially' is awkward; 'especially' is better. 'Anniversary' and 'birthday' need articles 'an' and 'a'. 'Flowers as a gift' should be plural 'flowers as gifts'.

× And during my anniversary last year, my friend sent me a banquet of red.

✓ And during my anniversary last year, my friend sent me a bouquet of red roses.

The word 'banquet' is incorrect in this context; 'bouquet' is the correct term for a bunch of flowers. The sentence is in past tense and correctly uses 'sent'.