Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: No, I don't really love flowers because they don't last long and I don't find them very beautiful personally.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "someone's like her". Hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers because she appreciates art and beautiful things that have a short life, like flowers. I really respect her elegant taste.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản và cụ thể hơn về tình hình hoa ở nơi bạn sống.

Exemplo: No, there are not many flowers where I live because the city is very modern and green spaces are limited. I wish there were more flowers around.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "empty board" và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn về việc bạn không chụp ảnh hoa.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I rarely take pictures in general.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ phù hợp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc gửi hoa trong văn hóa của bạn.

Exemplo: No, people in my country don't often send flowers. Usually, flowers are given only on special occasions like visiting a sick person or celebrating an event.

× No, I think that flowers are invaluable 'cause they really like become death really fast and also it's weren't beautiful for everyone like me.

✓ No, I think that flowers are invaluable because they really seem to die really fast and also they aren't beautiful to everyone like me.

The phrase 'like become death' is incorrect; the verb 'become' should not be used with 'like' in this context. Instead, 'seem to die' is appropriate. Also, 'it's weren't beautiful' mixes singular and past tense incorrectly; it should be 'they aren't beautiful' to agree with plural 'flowers' and present tense.

× No, I think that flowers are invaluable 'cause they really like become death really fast and also it's weren't beautiful for everyone like me.

✓ No, I think that flowers are invaluable because they really seem to die really fast and also they aren't beautiful to everyone like me.

The pronoun 'it's' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'flowers'. The correct pronoun is 'they' to refer to 'flowers'.

× I think, uh, as my mom, because she's quite a person who love arts and a beautiful things with a short life like flowers.

✓ I think, uh, my mom, because she's quite a person who loves arts and beautiful things with a short life like flowers.

The phrase 'as my mom' is incorrect; 'my mom' is sufficient. Also, 'who love arts and a beautiful things' has pronoun and article errors; 'who loves arts and beautiful things' is correct because 'she' is singular and 'things' is plural without 'a'.

× I think, uh, as my mom, because she's quite a person who love arts and a beautiful things with a short life like flowers.

✓ I think, uh, my mom, because she's quite a person who loves arts and beautiful things with a short life like flowers.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, 'a beautiful things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should not have the article 'a'.

× Umm, I really respect someone's like her with a favorite that really stylish and elegant like that.

✓ Umm, I really respect someone like her who has a favorite style that is really stylish and elegant like that.

The phrase 'someone's like her' is incorrect; it should be 'someone like her'. Also, 'with a favorite that really stylish' is unclear and needs correction to 'who has a favorite style that is really stylish'.

× No, uh, I think that the life is much more modern and flowers like the other tree.

✓ No, uh, I think that life is much more modern and flowers, like other trees, are not common.

The phrase 'flowers like the other tree' is incorrect; 'like other trees' is the correct prepositional phrase to compare flowers to trees in general.

× No, uh, I think that the life is much more modern and flowers like the other tree.

✓ No, uh, I think that life is much more modern and flowers, like other trees, are not common.

'The life' should be 'life' without 'the' because it is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'the other tree' should be plural 'other trees' to match the plural 'flowers'.

× I couldn't see it everywhere in my country, so I hope that there might be more flowers, but well, hopeless.

✓ I couldn't see them everywhere in my country, so I hope that there might be more flowers, but well, hopeless.

The pronoun 'it' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'flowers'. The correct pronoun is 'them'.

× I hope that there might be more flowers, but well, hopeless.

✓ I hope that there will be more flowers, but well, it's hopeless.

The modal verb 'might' suggests possibility, but 'hope' usually pairs with 'will' to express expectation. Also, 'hopeless' needs a subject and verb to form a complete sentence: 'it's hopeless'.

× No, I am a lazy photographer so uh, what inside my photo apps in my phone right now is just like an empty board so.

✓ No, I am a lazy photographer so, uh, what is inside my photo apps on my phone right now is just like an empty board.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to apps on a phone. Also, the sentence needed 'is' after 'what' for correct structure.

× And actually for flowers there was no any pictures even 1 so I might say no.

✓ And actually, for flowers, there were no pictures at all, not even one, so I might say no.

'No any pictures' is incorrect; use either 'no pictures' or 'not any pictures'. Also, 'was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'pictures'.

× And actually for flowers there was no any pictures even 1 so I might say no.

✓ And actually, for flowers, there were no pictures at all, not even one, so I might say no.

The verb 'was' is singular past tense and does not agree with plural 'pictures'; 'were' is correct.

× No, I think the reason is because that action is really exaggerated as you might give it into some specific occasions like, uh, meeting a patient or uh, giving to celebrate some things, but because that is just too rare.

✓ No, I think the reason is that action is really exaggerated as you might give it only on some specific occasions like, uh, visiting a patient or, uh, giving it to celebrate some things, but because that is just too rare.

The phrase 'because that action is' is better as 'that action is' after 'reason is'. Also, 'give it into' is incorrect; 'give it on' or 'give it only on' is better. 'Meeting a patient' should be 'visiting a patient'.