Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và dùng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về sở thích và lý do một cách ngắn gọn và mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Yes, I love colorful flowers because they make my room look more beautiful. However, I am allergic to them, so I cannot keep them in my room.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về người bạn biết.

Exemplo: Yes, my sister loves flowers. She often uploads pictures of flowers on her social media, and her room is always decorated with many beautiful flowers.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: 'flower shops' thay vì 'boutiques of flowers') và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flower shops on both sides of the pavement on my way to school. Also, my parents often buy beautiful flowers to decorate our home.

Sugestão: Bạn nên cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Nên nói rõ hơn về thói quen chụp ảnh hoa hoặc lý do không thể chụp.

Exemplo: Although I love flowers, I am allergic to them, so it is difficult for me to take photos of flowers. However, I often see pictures of flowers on social media every day.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp. Bạn cũng có thể thêm ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays. Sending flowers is a good way to show appreciation and respect to the recipient.

× Yes, I very loved, uh, the colorful flowers.

✓ Yes, I really loved the colorful flowers.

The phrase 'I very loved' is incorrect because 'very' is not used to modify verbs directly. Instead, 'really' is appropriate to intensify the verb 'loved'. Also, 'loved' is past tense, which fits the context if referring to past feelings.

× You know, it can, it can decorate to have my, to have my rooms more beautiful like that, but unfortunately I'm allergic to flowers.

✓ You know, it can decorate my rooms to make them more beautiful like that, but unfortunately I'm allergic to flowers.

The original sentence misuses 'decorate to have my rooms'. The correct structure is 'decorate my rooms' and 'to make them more beautiful'. Prepositions and infinitive forms were incorrectly used.

× Well, I think it's my sister, you know, she always uploads the pictures of flowers on her social medias and all.

✓ Well, I think it's my sister, you know, she always uploads pictures of flowers on her social media and all.

'Social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'the pictures' can be simplified to 'pictures' unless referring to specific ones.

× In her room is always have many beautiful flowers.

✓ There are always many beautiful flowers in her room.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'is' and 'have'. The correct structure to express existence is 'There are' followed by the plural noun 'many beautiful flowers'.

× Yes, every day when I go to school I saw many beautiful boutiques of flowers on on each side of pavement like that or in my at my homes.

✓ Yes, every day when I go to school I see many beautiful bouquets of flowers on each side of the pavement or at my home.

'Saw' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'see' is correct. 'Boutiques' is incorrect; the correct word is 'bouquets' for flower arrangements. Also, 'in my at my homes' is incorrect; 'at my home' is correct.

× My parents often bought some beautiful flowers to decorate.

✓ My parents often buy some beautiful flowers to decorate.

The verb 'bought' is past tense, but the adverb 'often' suggests habitual action, so present tense 'buy' is appropriate. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× Well although I very love of flowers I allergic to this so it quite hard for me to take photos with this but I still saw it every day see it every day in the on the social media.

✓ Well, although I really love flowers, I am allergic to them, so it's quite hard for me to take photos of them, but I still see them every day on social media.

Multiple issues: 'very love of flowers' should be 'really love flowers'; 'I allergic' lacks the verb 'am'; 'this' should be 'them' referring to flowers; 'it quite hard' needs 'it's quite hard'; 'take photos with this' should be 'take photos of them'; 'I still saw it every day see it every day' is inconsistent tense and redundant; 'in the on the social media' is incorrect preposition and article usage.

× I think yes, especially on some special occasion like birthday, sending flowers is a good way to show their appreciation and respect to the owner.

✓ I think yes, especially on special occasions like birthdays, sending flowers is a good way to show appreciation and respect to the recipient.

'On some special occasion like birthday' should be plural 'on special occasions like birthdays'. 'The owner' is vague; 'the recipient' is more appropriate. Also, 'their appreciation' is ambiguous; 'appreciation' without 'their' is better here.