Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some language errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'yellow red' and 'very cappy'. Try to use correct color terms and avoid unclear words. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really love flowers, especially those with bright colors like yellow and red. Their natural beauty is very captivating. For example, when I see blooming roses or sunflowers, I feel peaceful and connected to nature.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats phrases and has grammatical errors like 'has plant' and 'for very many years'. Try to avoid repetition and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and add specific details.

Exemplo: My grandmother loves flowers and has been growing many different varieties in our small garden for many years. She enjoys taking care of them, and as a result, the garden is now thriving with colorful blooms all year round.

Sugestão: Your answer has unclear words like 'flowering soaps' and 'medical'. Make sure to use correct vocabulary. Also, sentence structure needs improvement for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the flowers.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers in my home garden. I have a variety of plants, from small flowering shrubs to large blooming plants like roses and marigolds. I especially enjoy the colorful and fragrant garden that blooms during spring.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and contains unclear phrases like 'inner inner child really'. Try to avoid repeating words and express your feelings clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why you enjoy photographing flowers.

Exemplo: I enjoy taking pictures of flowers because their natural beauty fascinates me. Capturing their images helps me preserve memories and brings out my inner child’s joy.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has awkward phrasing like 'on occasions of a special moment' and 'used to give gifts on their birthday with a pot of flowers'. Use more natural expressions and correct prepositions. Add linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: People usually give flowers as gifts on special occasions. For example, it is common to present a pot of flowers to loved ones on their birthdays.

× I like yellow red because their natural beauty is very cappy, captivating.

✓ I like yellow and red because their natural beauty is very captivating.

The phrase 'yellow red' is incorrect; it should be 'yellow and red' to list colors properly. Also, 'cappy' is not a correct word; the intended word is 'captivating', which is an adjective describing the beauty. Use of correct adjectives improves clarity.

× For example, when I see blooming rose or sunflowers, it makes me feel very peaceful and relaxed if I'm connected to nature.

✓ For example, when I see blooming roses or sunflowers, it makes me feel very peaceful and relaxed if I'm connected to nature.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'sunflowers' and to indicate multiple flowers. Consistency in number is important for grammatical correctness.

× My grandmother loves flowers and has plant in many different varieties in many different varieties in our small garden for very many years.

✓ My grandmother loves flowers and has plants in many different varieties in our small garden for many years.

The word 'plant' should be plural 'plants' because it refers to multiple varieties. Also, the phrase 'in many different varieties' was repeated unnecessarily; it should appear only once. Correct plural forms and avoiding repetition improve sentence clarity.

× She enjoys taking care of them and the garden is now thriving with colorful blooms and year round.

✓ She enjoys taking care of them and the garden is now thriving with colorful blooms year-round.

The phrase 'and year round' is incorrect; 'year-round' is an adjective or adverb and should be hyphenated and placed correctly. The preposition 'with' is unnecessary before 'year-round'. Correct preposition and phrase placement improve sentence flow.

× Yes, there are many flowers in my home garden. I have varieties of plants from small flowering soaps to large blooming plants like rose and medical.

✓ Yes, there are many flowers in my home garden. I have varieties of plants from small flowering shrubs to large blooming plants like roses and medicinal plants.

The word 'soaps' is incorrect; likely intended word is 'shrubs'. 'Rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'plants'. 'Medical' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'medicinal' when referring to plants. Correct word choice and plural forms are necessary for clarity.

× Especially I really enjoy colorful and fragrant garden become during spring.

✓ Especially, I really enjoy the colorful and fragrant garden that blooms during spring.

The phrase 'garden become' is incorrect; it should be 'garden that blooms' or 'garden becoming'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'colorful and fragrant garden'. Correct use of articles and verb forms improves sentence correctness.

× I'm really fond of taking pictures of natural resources when it comes to flowers.

✓ I'm really fond of taking pictures of natural scenes when it comes to flowers.

'Natural resources' is not appropriate here; 'natural scenes' or 'nature' fits better when talking about flowers. Preposition 'of' is correct, but the noun phrase needs correction for meaning.

× I really get attached with their beauty and I really enjoy taking pictures of flowers as well As for memories also, it really makes my inner inner child really.

✓ I really get attached to their beauty and I really enjoy taking pictures of flowers as well. Also, for memories, it really makes my inner child happy.

The phrase 'attached with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'attached to'. The sentence is also repetitive and unclear; 'inner inner child really' is incorrect and should be 'inner child happy'. Proper preposition use and sentence clarity are important.

× The people usually gift flowers to others, especially on occasions of a special moment.

✓ People usually gift flowers to others, especially on special occasions.

The phrase 'on occasions of a special moment' is awkward; 'on special occasions' is the correct expression. Also, 'The people' is unnecessary; 'People' suffices. Modal verb usage is not directly involved, but sentence structure and word choice are improved.

× For example, people used to give gifts on their birthday with a pot of flowers to their loved one.

✓ For example, people usually give gifts on their birthday with a pot of flowers to their loved ones.

'Used to give' implies past habit, but the context suggests a current habit, so 'usually give' is better. Also, 'loved one' should be plural 'loved ones' to match general meaning. Correct tense and plural forms improve accuracy.