Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“very like”应为“really like”，“more better”是不正确的表达。建议使用正确的语法结构，并简洁表达你的感受。

Exemplo: Yes, I really like flowers because they have bright colors and pleasant scents that make me feel happier.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“very likes”应为“really likes”，“like rose or and so on and may plant”不完整。建议简洁明了地表达，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: My mother really likes flowers, so she has a big garden where she grows many kinds, such as roses and tulips. Planting flowers is her favorite hobby.

Sugestão: 回答中有冗余和语法错误，如“which I really love them”重复。建议简洁表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers on my school campus, including roses and lilies. They have bright colors and pleasant scents, which I really enjoy.

Sugestão: 回答较完整，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“which has”应为“which have”。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更自然。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they are very beautiful. They have vibrant colors and fragrant smells, so I like to capture these special moments.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并避免句子中断。

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts because it is a polite way to show respect and appreciation to others.

× Yes, I very like flowers.

✓ Yes, I like flowers very much.

副词 'very' 不能直接修饰动词 'like'，应使用 'like ... very much' 来表达程度。

× Flowers have have bright colors and good smells which can make me feel more better and.

✓ Flowers have bright colors and good smells which can make me feel better.

'have have' 是重复错误，应去掉一个 'have'。'more better' 是错误的比较级表达，'better' 已经是比较级，不需要 'more'。句尾的 'and' 是多余的，应删除。

× My mother very likes flowers so she has a big garden to plant many kinds of flowers like rose or and so on and may plant.

✓ My mother likes flowers very much, so she has a big garden to plant many kinds of flowers like roses and so on.

'very likes' 是错误的副词位置，正确应为 'likes ... very much'。'rose' 应为复数 'roses'。'or and so on and may plant' 语义混乱，应简化为 'and so on'。

× I live in my school campus and there are various kinds of flowers in the campus like roses and lilies and they all have bright colors and pleasant smells which I really love them.

✓ I live on my school campus and there are various kinds of flowers on the campus like roses and lilies, and they all have bright colors and pleasant smells which I really love.

'in my school campus' 应改为 'on my school campus'。句尾 'which I really love them' 中 'them' 多余，应去掉。

× I live in my school campus and there are various kinds of flowers in the campus like roses and lilies and they all have bright colors and pleasant smells which I really love them.

✓ I live on my school campus and there are various kinds of flowers on the campus like roses and lilies, and they all have bright colors and pleasant smells which I really love.

'live in the campus' 应改为 'live on the campus'，表示在校园内。

× which I really love them.

✓ which I really love.

关系代词 'which' 已经指代前面的内容，后面不需要再加宾格代词 'them'，否则重复。

× I live in my school campus and there are various kinds of flowers in the campus like roses and lilies and they all have bright colors and pleasant smells which I really love them.

✓ I live on my school campus and there are various kinds of flowers on the campus like roses and lilies, and they all have bright colors and pleasant smells which I really love.

'in the campus' 应改为 'on the campus'，这里 'campus' 前加定冠词 'the' 是正确的。

× because these flowers are very beautiful which has vibrant colors and fragrant smells, so I want to take pictures of them to capture these special moments in my life.

✓ because these flowers are very beautiful and have vibrant colors and fragrant smells, so I want to take pictures of them to capture these special moments in my life.

'which has' 连接词用法不当，应改为并列句 'and have'，且 'flowers' 是复数，谓语动词应用复数 'have'。

× because these flowers are very beautiful which has vibrant colors and fragrant smells, so I want to take pictures of them to capture these special moments in my life.

✓ because these flowers are very beautiful and have vibrant colors and fragrant smells, so I want to take pictures of them to capture these special moments in my life.

关系代词 'which' 用法不当，且谓语动词与主语不一致，应改为并列句。

× Yes, they often send flowers to others as a gift because sending flowers to the people they meet firstly is a great way to show our politeness and also.

✓ Yes, they often send flowers to others as a gift because sending flowers to the people they meet first is a great way to show our politeness.

句子末尾 'and also' 不完整，应删除。'firstly' 在此处用 'first' 更自然。