Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and avoid redundancy. Instead of repeating 'flowers' multiple times, use synonyms or rephrase. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they bring me positive energy. For instance, their vibrant colours and pleasant scents always brighten my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by using more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'and so on'.

Exemplo: Yes, my friend Zara loves flowers. She has grown a variety of them in her lawn, and she takes great care of them every day by watering and removing dead leaves to keep them healthy.

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'a countryside' should be 'the countryside'.

Exemplo: Unfortunately, there are not many flowers where I live because I currently live in the countryside. However, some people have planted flowers in their gardens, but they are not very common.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, use correct expressions like 'in daily life' instead of 'in a daily life'.

Exemplo: I don't take photos of flowers every day, but whenever I come across beautiful flowers, I like to photograph them. For example, I often post these pictures on Instagram and Facebook.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid repeating 'people' unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, in my country, flowers are often sent to express love and respect. For instance, they are commonly given on special occasions such as anniversaries, birthdays, and retirements.

× Flower gives me positive vibes and I like the flora of the flowers.

✓ Flowers give me positive vibes and I like the flora of the flowers.

The noun 'Flower' should be plural 'Flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower. Using plural form is appropriate when talking about things in general.

× She likes flowers and she had grown a variety of flowers in her lawn and she takes care of them every day.

✓ She likes flowers and she has grown a variety of flowers in her lawn and she takes care of them every day.

The past perfect tense 'had grown' is incorrect here because the action is relevant to the present. Present perfect 'has grown' is appropriate to indicate an action that started in the past and continues or has relevance now.

× She never forgot to water them and take extra care of them like removing the beads and so on.

✓ She never forgets to water them and takes extra care of them like removing the beads and so on.

The sentence talks about habitual actions, so present tense 'never forgets' and 'takes' should be used instead of past tense 'forgot'.

× Unfortunately there are not many flowers where I live and currently I live a countryside, but the people there do not grow much flowers and I can say that in some homes people have planted some flowers in their garden.

✓ Unfortunately there are not many flowers where I live and currently I live in the countryside, but the people there do not grow many flowers and I can say that in some homes people have planted some flowers in their garden.

The phrase 'a countryside' is incorrect; 'countryside' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'the' and the preposition 'in'. Also, 'much flowers' is incorrect; 'many flowers' is correct because 'flowers' is countable.

× I'm not in a daily life but I can say I take the photos of the flowers when I found them.

✓ I'm not in daily life but I can say I take photos of flowers when I find them.

The phrase 'I'm not in a daily life' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'I'm not in daily life' or better 'I don't take photos daily'. Also, 'when I found them' should be present tense 'when I find them' to match the habitual action.

× People send flowers to each other to show their love and respect to the other person and people usually give flowers on special occasions like anniversaries, birthday parties and on retirements also.

✓ People send flowers to each other to show their love and respect for the other person and people usually give flowers on special occasions like anniversaries, birthday parties and retirements also.

The preposition 'respect to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'respect for'. Also, 'on retirements' should be 'retirements' without 'on' because 'on' is not used with 'retirements' in this context.