Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to add a bit more specific detail to enrich your response without exceeding five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do love flowers because they are beautiful and can brighten up any space. For instance, even just seeing a few flowers on the street can instantly lift my mood and make my day better.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details. Also, avoid run-on sentences by using proper punctuation.

Exemplo: Yes, my mum loves flowers. She grows several varieties on our balcony and takes great care of them, almost as if they were proud members of our family.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and provide specific details. Also, ensure correct article usage and sentence structure.

Exemplo: There aren't many flowers in the city centre; however, you can find plenty in parks and flower shops, especially during festivals when colourful displays are set up.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more coherent by combining sentences with linking words. Also, use articles correctly and provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.

Exemplo: Sometimes, if I see a particularly pretty flower, I take a quick photo for Instagram because it's a simple way to capture and share its beauty.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and avoid ambiguity.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers, especially during holidays, graduations, or when someone is in hospital, as a common way to express care and congratulations.

× My mom does she even grow some flowers on our balcony and take care of them like they're proud of the family.

✓ My mom does; she even grows some flowers on our balcony and takes care of them like they're proud of the family.

The sentence has a singular and plural issue with the verb 'grow' which should be 'grows' to agree with the singular subject 'My mom'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs a semicolon or conjunction to separate the two independent clauses.

× Not really in the city center, but you can find them in park and flower shop during festival near a more colorful display around.

✓ Not really in the city center, but you can find them in parks and flower shops during festivals near a more colourful display around.

The prepositions and articles are incorrect here. 'In park' should be 'in parks' (plural) and 'flower shop' should be 'flower shops' to match plural context. Also, 'during festival' should be 'during festivals' to indicate plural events. The sentence needed plural forms and correct prepositions to be grammatically correct.

× Sometimes if I see particularly pretty one, I'll take a quick photo for Instagram.

✓ Sometimes if I see a particularly pretty one, I'll take a quick photo for Instagram.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'particularly pretty one' which is singular. This is necessary to make the noun phrase grammatically correct.

× Yeah, especially during the holiday graduation or when someone is in the hospital, it is a common way to show care and congratulations.

✓ Yeah, especially during holidays, graduations, or when someone is in hospital, it is a common way to show care and congratulations.

The phrase 'during the holiday graduation' is incorrect. It should be 'during holidays, graduations' to indicate plural events. Also, in British English, 'in hospital' is used without 'the' when referring to someone being admitted. These prepositional and article corrections improve grammatical accuracy.