Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but starting with 'And yes' is unnatural. Try to begin directly with your opinion. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly and use linking words to connect your points.

Exemplo: Yes, I really love flowers because their beauty and vibrant colours instantly lift my mood. For instance, I especially enjoy cherry blossoms and roses due to their delicate appearance and pleasant fragrance.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more confident. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement ('talk' should be 'talks'). Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about what you learned.

Exemplo: Yes, my grandma is absolutely obsessed with flowers. She grows roses in her garden and even talks to them as if they were pets. Moreover, she has taught me many useful tips on how to care for different types of flowers, such as watering schedules and soil preferences.

Sugestão: Try to avoid fillers like 'umm' and use more precise language. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, 'in garden by the street' should be 'in gardens by the street'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, there are plenty of flowers around my area. People often grow flowers in gardens by the street, as well as in front of shops and houses, which makes the neighbourhood colourful and welcoming.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, try to use more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid 'would like' when talking about habitual actions; use the simple present tense instead.

Exemplo: Yes, whenever I see beautiful flowers, I usually take a quick photo because it helps me preserve the memory and capture their beauty.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'birthday graduation' should be 'birthdays, graduations'. Also, 'Either' is incorrect here; use 'Either occasion' or 'These occasions'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, in China, people often send flowers to others, especially on occasions like birthdays, graduations, or hospital visits. These are thoughtful and respectful gestures to express love and care.

× She grows roses in her garden and even talk to them as if they were her pets.

✓ She grows roses in her garden and even talks to them as if they were her pets.

The verb 'talk' should be in the third person singular form 'talks' to agree with the singular subject 'She'. In English, verbs in the present tense add an 's' or 'es' for third person singular subjects.

× And umm, she also has taught me a lot of knowledge about how to care for different flowers.

✓ And umm, she has also taught me a lot about how to care for different flowers.

The phrase 'has taught' is correct in present perfect tense, but 'a lot of knowledge' is awkward; 'a lot about' is more natural. Also, 'has' and 'also' are better placed as 'has also' for correct word order.

× People grow flowers in garden by the street or even in front of many stores or families.

✓ People grow flowers in gardens by the street or even in front of many stores or houses.

The noun 'garden' should be plural 'gardens' to match the plural subject 'people'. Also, 'families' is incorrect here; 'houses' or 'homes' is appropriate when referring to places where flowers are grown.

× Yes, in China, people like to send flowers to others, especially birthday graduation or hospital visits.

✓ Yes, in China, people like to send flowers to others, especially for birthdays, graduations, or hospital visits.

The nouns 'birthday' and 'graduation' need to be plural and preceded by the preposition 'for' to indicate occasions. Also, commas are needed to separate the items in the list.

× Either is a thoughtful and respectful gesture to express your love.

✓ Either is a thoughtful and respectful gesture to express love.

The pronoun 'your' is inappropriate here because the sentence refers generally to people sending flowers, not specifically to the listener. Omitting 'your' makes the sentence more general and correct.