FlowersPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you love flowers?

Candidato

Well, maybe I'm not sure, but my mom loves flower very much and she prompt a lot of flowers in front of the gate of our home.

Examinador

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Candidato

Yes, my mom just what I say, she plants a lot of flowers in front of the the gate of my home and also my grandpa loves planting flowers too and she he has a yacht to plant a lot of a lot of flowers and vegetables.

Examinador

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Candidato

Yes, just what I'm saying. My mom plant a lot of flowers and she all sometimes put some flowers in on the table of canteen and also in each room we have a little plant of flower.

Examinador

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Candidato

No, I don't because I'm not very interested in taking photo and also I don't I think I'm not very like flowers and then not I'm not hate or dislike, just just don't like.

Examinador

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Candidato

Well, well, I'm not sure because I'm not. Usually you see someone send the flowers to to others. And if people need to send flowers, it must be some festivals or some holidays.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Do you love flowers?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答不够直接,且有语法错误和用词不当。建议直接表达自己是否喜欢花,并注意动词时态和拼写。

Exemplo: I am not very sure if I love flowers, but I know my mom loves them a lot and she often plants many flowers in front of our house.

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地介绍两个人喜欢花,并避免重复和错误。

Exemplo: Yes, my mom and grandpa both love planting flowers. My grandpa even has a yard where he grows many flowers and vegetables.

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不流畅。建议使用正确的时态和介词,清晰描述花的分布。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My mom plants a lot of them, and sometimes she puts flowers on the canteen table and in every room we have a small flower plant.

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 回答表达混乱,语法和词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地表达不喜欢拍花的原因。

Exemplo: No, I don't take photos of flowers because I am not very interested in photography and I don't like flowers very much.

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答不够流畅,存在重复和语法错误。建议用更自然的表达说明送花的习惯和场合。

Exemplo: I'm not sure, but usually people send flowers to others during festivals or special holidays rather than on ordinary days.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× my mom loves flower very much

my mom loves flowers very much

flower是可数名词,表示花朵,复数形式应为flowers。这里表示很多花,应该用复数形式。

Verb in the present participle form

× she prompt a lot of flowers in front of the gate of our home

she plants a lot of flowers in front of the gate of our home

prompt不是动词的正确形式,应该用plant的第三人称单数形式plants,表示种植。

Singular and plural issue

× she plants a lot of flowers in front of the the gate of my home and also my grandpa loves planting flowers too and she he has a yacht to plant a lot of a lot of flowers and vegetables

she plants a lot of flowers in front of the gate of my home and also my grandpa loves planting flowers too and he has a yard to plant a lot of flowers and vegetables

the the是重复错误,应改为the;yacht(游艇)应为yard(院子);a lot of重复,应去掉多余部分;she he代词混用,应改为he。

Singular and plural issue

× My mom plant a lot of flowers and she all sometimes put some flowers in on the table of canteen and also in each room we have a little plant of flower

My mom plants a lot of flowers and she sometimes puts some flowers on the table of the canteen and also in each room we have a little plant of flowers

mom是第三人称单数,动词应加s;put应为puts;on the table前不需要in;canteen前应加定冠词the;plant of flower应为plant of flowers,flower应为复数。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× she all sometimes put some flowers in on the table of canteen

she sometimes puts some flowers on the table of the canteen

in on是重复使用,应去掉in,只用on;canteen前应加定冠词the。

Singular and plural issue

× in each room we have a little plant of flower

in each room we have a little plant of flowers

flower应为复数flowers,表示多种花。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× she he has a yacht to plant a lot of a lot of flowers and vegetables

he has a yard to plant a lot of flowers and vegetables

she he代词混用,应统一为he;yacht应为yard。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I don't I think I'm not very like flowers

I don't think I like flowers very much

句子结构混乱,I don't和I think重复,应合并;like后面不加very,very修饰like应放在前面。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× not I'm not hate or dislike, just just don't like

I don't hate or dislike them, I just don't like them

hate和dislike后面需要宾语,缺少them;句子缺少主语I。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Usually you see someone send the flowers to to others

Usually you see someone send flowers to others

the flowers前不需要定冠词the;to to重复,应去掉一个to。

Vocabulário

InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
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