Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免性别刻板印象，且表达更自然流畅。可以直接表达对花的喜爱，并具体说明喜欢的原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I really love flowers, especially roses, because they have a beautiful fragrance and vibrant colors.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。

Exemplo: My mom loves flowers very much, especially roses. For example, I always give her a bunch of roses on Mother's Day to show my appreciation.

Sugestão: 语法和表达有误，应注意主谓一致和句子结构，且用词准确。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并使用连接词。

Exemplo: No, there are few flowers on my campus because it is near the seaside, and the soil is not very fertile, which makes it hard for flowers to grow.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。应直接回答问题并说明具体情况，避免模糊和错误表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I receive a bouquet of roses. I like to capture their beauty and share the pictures with my friends.

Sugestão: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, in China, people often send flowers as gifts during special festivals to express their feelings and surprise their loved ones.

× No, there is few flowers in my campus.

✓ No, there are few flowers on my campus.

这里的主语是复数名词“flowers”，所以谓语动词应该用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。另外，介词应使用“on”表示在校园内。

× My campus is near the seaside so its oil is not so healthy a which means it harder to grow flowers.

✓ My campus is near the seaside, so its soil is not very healthy, which means it is harder to grow flowers.

单词“oil”应为“soil”（土壤），且句中缺少逗号分隔从句，且“a”多余，应删除。

× every time I made flowers, I took pictures by my friends, and when I received a bunch of roses, I must take some photos and send it to the firm.

✓ Every time I made flowers, I took pictures with my friends, and when I received a bunch of roses, I had to take some photos and send them to the firm.

“by my friends”应改为“with my friends”表示和朋友一起；“must”用于过去时应改为“had to”；“send it”中的“it”应改为复数“them”，因为指的是多张照片。

× Yes, in China, flowers is a gift to another one, and when a special festival arrived, people often send flowers as a gift to give them surprising feeling.

✓ Yes, in China, flowers are a gift to others, and when a special festival arrives, people often send flowers as a gift to give them a surprising feeling.

“flowers”是复数，谓语动词应为“are”；“another one”用法不当，应改为“others”；“arrived”应为一般现在时“arrives”，因为描述习惯；“surprising feeling”前应加冠词“a”。