Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about the flowers and their fragrance.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much. Around my house, there are many beautiful flowers that attract me. Their fragrance is so pleasant and unique that it feels like heaven. Because of this, I enjoy spending time in my garden.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and add specific details about your friend's love for flowers.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a friend named Moksh who loves flowers a lot. His house is beautifully decorated with various kinds of flowers. In fact, when you enter his house, you can see flowers everywhere, which makes the place very lively and colourful.

Sugestão: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific examples and explain why people love flowers in your area.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, tulips, lotuses, and roses are quite common. People in my community love flowers because of their vibrant colours and pleasant fragrance, which create a beautiful atmosphere around us.

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. Clearly state your habit and give specific details about when you take photos of flowers.

Exemplo: I don't take photos of flowers every day, but whenever I visit a new place and see flowers I haven't seen before, I like to take pictures of them and save them on my phone.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples of occasions when people send flowers.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, if someone is in the hospital, they send flowers to wish them a speedy recovery. Similarly, flowers are sent as well wishes during weddings and other celebrations.

× I do love flowers because when where I live there are so many flowers plant around my house and they are too attractive and their smells are very imaginative that no one can imagine their smell and they feels like heaven.

✓ I do love flowers because where I live there are so many flower plants around my house and they are very attractive and their smells are so imaginative that no one can imagine their smell and they feel like heaven.

The word 'plant' should be pluralized to 'plants' to correctly describe multiple flowers. 'Too attractive' is better expressed as 'very attractive' to convey a positive degree. 'Feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. Also, 'when where' is incorrect; 'where' alone is sufficient. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I do love flowers because when where I live there are so many flowers plant around my house and they are too attractive and their smells are very imaginative that no one can imagine their smell and they feels like heaven.

✓ I do love flowers because where I live there are so many flower plants around my house and they are very attractive and their smells are so imaginative that no one can imagine their smell and they feel like heaven.

The pronoun 'their' is used correctly for plural nouns, but the sentence structure is confusing. Simplifying and correcting the pronoun references helps the sentence flow better and makes the meaning clearer.

× Yes, there is my friend whose name is Moksh.

✓ Yes, I have a friend whose name is Moksh.

The phrase 'there is my friend' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'I have a friend' to indicate possession or acquaintance. This correction uses the appropriate preposition and verb to convey the intended meaning.

× He loves flowers so much that his house is decorated by flowers and he has so much flowers in his house that one if one goes inside his house all he can see is flowers and flowers.

✓ He loves flowers so much that his house is decorated with flowers and he has so many flowers in his house that if one goes inside, all he can see is flowers and flowers.

'So much flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' is countable; it should be 'so many flowers'. Also, 'decorated by flowers' should be 'decorated with flowers' to use the correct preposition. The phrase 'one if one' is a typo and corrected to 'if one'. These changes correct plural usage and preposition errors.

× He loves flowers so much that his house is decorated by flowers and he has so much flowers in his house that one if one goes inside his house all he can see is flowers and flowers.

✓ He loves flowers so much that his house is decorated with flowers and he has so many flowers in his house that if one goes inside, all he can see is flowers and flowers.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect in this context; 'decorated with' is the correct phrase to indicate what the house is decorated with. This correction improves the sentence's grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, where I live there are lot of flowers.

✓ Yes, where I live there are lots of flowers.

'Lot' should be pluralized to 'lots' when used with 'of' to indicate a large number of countable nouns like 'flowers'. This correction ensures proper quantifier usage.

× For example there are some tulips, there are some Lotus as well as rose.

✓ For example, there are some tulips, some lotuses, as well as roses.

'Lotus' and 'rose' should be pluralized to 'lotuses' and 'roses' to agree with 'some', which indicates plural. This correction fixes the singular/plural mismatch.

× Because in my society everyone loves Lover and how they attract them and their vibrant colours and their pleasant fragrance spreaded around everywhere.

✓ Because in my society everyone loves flowers and how they attract them with their vibrant colours and their pleasant fragrance spreading all around.

'Lover' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. Also, 'spreaded' is incorrect past tense; the present participle 'spreading' fits better here. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× their pleasant fragrance spreaded around everywhere.

✓ their pleasant fragrance spreads all around everywhere.

'Spreaded' is not a correct past tense form; the past tense and past participle of 'spread' is 'spread'. However, since the sentence describes a general fact, present tense 'spreads' is appropriate. This correction fixes the verb tense error.

× So yeah, everyone loves flower in my society.

✓ So yeah, everyone loves flowers in my society.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because 'everyone loves' refers to flowers in general, which is plural. This correction fixes the singular/plural mismatch.

× I do take photos of flower but not in my daily life but wherever I go or whenever I go to any place and there I can see some flowers which I didn't have seen earlier so I click their photos and keep it in my phone.

✓ I do take photos of flowers but not daily; wherever I go and see some flowers I haven't seen before, I click their photos and keep them on my phone.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'photos of'. Also, 'didn't have seen' is incorrect; 'haven't seen' is the correct present perfect form. 'Keep it' should be 'keep them' to agree with plural 'photos'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.

× which I didn't have seen earlier

✓ which I haven't seen before

'Didn't have seen' is an incorrect past perfect negative form. The correct present perfect negative is 'haven't seen' to indicate an action not experienced up to now. This correction fixes the tense error.

× and keep it in my phone.

✓ and keep them on my phone.

'Keep it in my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to storing files or photos on a device. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'photos'. This correction fixes preposition and pronoun errors.

× Yes they do do As for example if someone is in hospital they send flowers as an greeting that get well soon and if some there is someone's marriage they send flowers as a greetings like well wishes for your future.

✓ Yes, they do. For example, if someone is in the hospital, they send flowers as a greeting to say 'get well soon', and if there is someone's marriage, they send flowers as greetings with well wishes for the future.

The sentence has repeated 'do do' which is corrected to 'do'. 'In hospital' should be 'in the hospital' for correct article use. 'An greeting' should be 'a greeting' because 'greeting' starts with a consonant sound. 'As a greetings' should be 'as greetings' (plural) or 'as a greeting' (singular). The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun and article usage.