Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and ensure correct grammar, for example, use 'because' properly and avoid repeating words like 'so very, very so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers a lot because there are many varieties near my house. Among them, I especially like roses and sunflowers, as sunflowers give me a unique energy due to their vibrant colour.

Sugestão: Focus on correct subject-verb agreement and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain why your friend loves flowers. Also, clarify your sentences for better coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a close friend who absolutely loves flowers because she enjoys gardening. She often spends her weekends on her balcony planting and caring for various types of flowers, which helps her relax.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to list flowers. Also, complete your thoughts clearly and check grammar, especially verb forms.

Exemplo: I live in northern India, where several varieties of flowers grow seasonally, such as sunflowers and roses. I particularly love sunflowers because they grow well in this region.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more concise. Avoid unnecessary words and ensure correct prepositions. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers on my phone because I love their beauty. The vibrant colours and pleasant fragrance always attract me.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'for example' to list occasions. Also, clarify your ideas and use correct articles and pronouns.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to friends and family on special occasions, such as anniversaries, birthdays, and meetings. Sending flowers is a special way to express love and blessings.

× There are several varieties of flowers available near to my house and I love roses and sunflowers especially Sunflowers gave me a different kind of energy because its color is so very, very so vibrant and.

✓ There are several varieties of flowers available near my house and I love roses and sunflowers especially. Sunflowers give me a different kind of energy because their color is very vibrant.

The phrase 'near to my house' is incorrect; 'near my house' is the correct prepositional phrase (Problem type 11). Also, 'Sunflowers gave me' should be 'Sunflowers give me' to maintain present tense consistency (Problem type 6). The pronoun 'its' referring to 'Sunflowers' (plural) should be 'their' (Problem type 12). The sentence was also incomplete and needed proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× She enjoy gardening and often spend her weekends with with her balcony and planting and caring for their plants and there are different types of flowers in her balcony.

✓ She enjoys gardening and often spends her weekends on her balcony planting and caring for her plants. There are different types of flowers on her balcony.

The verbs 'enjoy' and 'spend' need to agree with the third person singular subject 'She', so they should be 'enjoys' and 'spends' (Problem type 2). The preposition 'with her balcony' is incorrect; it should be 'on her balcony' (Problem type 11). The pronoun 'their' referring to 'her plants' should be 'her' (Problem type 12). The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× It provide our relaxation and.

✓ It provides us relaxation.

The verb 'provide' must agree with the singular subject 'It', so it should be 'provides' (Problem type 2). The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here; 'us' is the correct object pronoun (Problem type 12). The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I live in the northern region of India where there are several varieties of flower grown on the on the season occasionally like sunflowers and there are several varieties of roses available here in my area and I love sunflowers because it grow in the special.

✓ I live in the northern region of India where several varieties of flowers grow occasionally in the season, like sunflowers. There are several varieties of roses available here in my area, and I love sunflowers because they grow in special conditions.

'Varieties of flower' should be 'varieties of flowers' (Problem type 1). The phrase 'grown on the on the season occasionally' is incorrect; it should be 'grow occasionally in the season' (Problem type 5 and 6). The pronoun 'it' referring to 'sunflowers' (plural) should be 'they' (Problem type 12). The sentence was also run-on and needed punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, there are several times I love to take photos in of flowers in my phone because I love flowers and their beauty and hence everything about me and my surround surrounding the vibrant color of flowers catches me a lot and their fragrance.

✓ Yes, there are several times when I love to take photos of flowers on my phone because I love flowers and their beauty. Everything around me, including the vibrant colors of flowers and their fragrance, attracts me a lot.

The phrase 'photos in of flowers in my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'photos of flowers on my phone' (Problem type 11). 'Surround surrounding' is incorrect and should be 'around me' (Problem type 11). The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× Yes, yes, people in my country often send flowers to friends and family on the special occasion like anniversary, birthday and the meetings there.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to friends and family on special occasions like anniversaries, birthdays, and meetings.

'The special occasion' should be plural 'special occasions' because multiple events are mentioned (Problem type 14). 'Anniversary' and 'birthday' should be plural to match the context (Problem type 1). 'The meetings there' is awkward and unnecessary; 'meetings' suffices.

× The sending flowers means the we are sending their blessings to them and it's a very special way to say love.

✓ Sending flowers means we are sending our blessings to them, and it's a very special way to express love.

'The sending flowers' should be 'Sending flowers' without 'the' (Problem type 22). 'The we' is incorrect; it should be 'we' (Problem type 12). 'Their blessings' should be 'our blessings' because the sender is sending blessings (Problem type 12). 'Say love' is incorrect; 'express love' is appropriate (Problem type 13).