Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免使用“yes or no”这类口语化且不自然的表达，且句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and fragrant, which makes me feel happy. However, sometimes I dislike them because they wilt quickly.

Sugestão: 回答中重复了考官的问题，且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的代词和时态，并提供具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, my friend loves flowers. Whenever I visit her home, I see many flowers in her garden, which shows her passion for them.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达错误较多。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并避免不相关或错误的信息。

Exemplo: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in an apartment building with many people, so there is little space for flowers.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，并具体说明拍摄花的原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy both flowers and photography. I have several cameras, so I always capture beautiful flowers when I see them.

Sugestão: 回答语法混乱，表达不完整。建议直接回答问题，并举例说明在什么场合人们会送花。

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and festivals.

× On the one hand I think flower is very beautiful and is very fragrant and look the flower can make me more happy but on the one other hand the flower has always have instant like feet so I don't like.

✓ On the one hand, I think flowers are very beautiful and very fragrant, and looking at flowers can make me happier, but on the other hand, flowers always have an instant like feet, so I don't like them.

这里“flower”应使用复数形式“flowers”，因为指的是花的总体。动词“is”应改为“are”以匹配复数主语。

× Do you know anyone who love flowers? I think it's my friends because when I go to She's Home she has a lot of the flower in She's homes gardens so I think she's very love flowers.

✓ Do you know anyone who loves flowers? I think it's my friend because when I go to her home, she has a lot of flowers in her home's garden, so I think she really loves flowers.

“anyone”是单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“loves”。“friends”应改为单数“friend”以匹配上下文。名词“flower”应使用复数“flowers”。

× Do you know anyone who love flowers? I think it's my friends because when I go to She's Home she has a lot of the flower in She's homes gardens so I think she's very love flowers.

✓ Do you know anyone who loves flowers? I think it's my friend because when I go to her home, she has a lot of flowers in her home's garden, so I think she really loves flowers.

“She's Home”应改为“her home”，正确使用物主代词。

× No because I live in a flat so have a many many people in the house so people will to pick to eat the flower. So not a lot of the flower where I lived.

✓ No, because I live in a flat where many people live, so people will pick and eat the flowers. So there are not a lot of flowers where I live.

“a many many people”应改为“many people”，去掉多余冠词。名词“flower”应使用复数“flowers”。

× No because I live in a flat so have a many many people in the house so people will to pick to eat the flower. So not a lot of the flower where I lived.

✓ No, because I live in a flat where many people live, so people will pick and eat the flowers. So there are not a lot of flowers where I live.

句中缺少“there are”结构，表示“有很多花”，应补充完整。

× Yes, I always take photos of the flowers in my daily life because I like flowers and I like taking photos. I have many camera so when I look there when I look the flowers I will take them photos and regret them.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of flowers in my daily life because I like flowers and I like taking photos. I have many cameras, so when I see flowers, I will take photos of them and keep them.

“regret them”用词错误，应为“keep them”或“save them”。“camera”应使用复数“cameras”。

× Yes, many people in our country in my country often send flowers to others such as if in the important, fascinating always people often send flowers to.

✓ Yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on important and special occasions.

句子中“in our country in my country”重复，应简化。

× Yes, many people in our country in my country often send flowers to others such as if in the important, fascinating always people often send flowers to.

✓ Yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on important and special occasions.

“fascinating”用词不当，应改为“special occasions”或“important occasions”。