Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to sound more natural and confident. Also, use correct prepositions and plural forms, for example, 'I usually buy flowers for my family and my girlfriend.'

Exemplo: Yes, I do love flowers. I often buy them for my family and my girlfriend because I believe flowers can bring happiness and positive emotions to people.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, clarify unclear phrases and use correct grammar, for example, 'My girlfriend loves flowers and often asks me to buy her a bunch, especially on special occasions like Valentine's Day.'

Exemplo: Yes, my girlfriend loves flowers. She often asks me to buy her a bunch, especially on special occasions like Valentine's Day.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, avoid hesitation sounds, and use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. For example, say 'Yes, there are many flowers where I live because I have a small balcony where I can plant some flowers.'

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because I have a small balcony where I can plant some flowers.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use correct plural forms and avoid repetition. For example, 'I don't often take photos of flowers, but sometimes I do. Most of the photos on my phone are of animals because I really love them.'

Exemplo: I don't often take photos of flowers, but sometimes I do. Most of the photos on my phone are of animals because I really love them.

Sugestão: Give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases like 'volunteer days' and 'any set, any celebrity.' For example, 'Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays and Valentine's Day.'

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays and Valentine's Day.

× I usually buy flowers to my families in my girlfriends.

✓ I usually buy flowers for my family and my girlfriend.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used here. When giving something to someone, 'for' is used to indicate the recipient's benefit. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' and 'girlfriends' should be singular 'girlfriend' to match the intended meaning.

× I usually buy flowers to my families in my girlfriends.

✓ I usually buy flowers for my family and my girlfriend.

The plural forms 'families' and 'girlfriends' are incorrect here because the speaker likely refers to one family and one girlfriend. Using singular forms is appropriate.

× Even even then I'm not quite into it but.

✓ Even then, I'm not quite into it.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words. Removing the repeated 'even' and the conjunction 'but' at the end improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× As I think flower, it can bring a lot of good emotion to people.

✓ As I think, flowers can bring a lot of good emotions to people.

The singular 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the general statement. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to reflect multiple feelings. Adding a comma after 'As I think' improves readability.

× Ah definitely my girlfriend she asked me to buy flowers a bunch a bunch of flowers to her everyday like volunteers daizan first day.

✓ Ah, definitely my girlfriend; she asks me to buy a bunch of flowers for her every day, like on Valentine's Day or her birthday.

The original sentence is run-on and unclear. Adding punctuation and correcting 'volunteers daizan first day' to 'Valentine's Day or her birthday' clarifies meaning. Also, 'asks' is present tense to match habitual action, and 'for her' is the correct preposition.

× she asked me to buy flowers a bunch a bunch of flowers to her everyday like volunteers daizan first day.

✓ she asks me to buy a bunch of flowers for her every day, like on Valentine's Day or her birthday.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' is used when buying something intended for someone. Also, 'everyday' should be 'every day' as two words when meaning each day.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× Uhm, yes, I think because, because, uh, in my, in my house. We have a. A little balcony are an we can plan some flowers. In Edge.

✓ Uhm, yes, I think because in my house we have a little balcony where we can plant some flowers in pots.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'are an' and 'In Edge'. Correcting to a coherent sentence with proper structure and vocabulary improves clarity.

× We have a. A little balcony are an we can plan some flowers. In Edge.

✓ We have a little balcony where we can plant some flowers in pots.

The phrase 'plan some flowers' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'plant'. Also, 'in Edge' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'in pots' is a common phrase for growing flowers on balconies.

× I'm not often, but sometimes.

✓ I don't often, but sometimes I do.

The phrase 'I'm not often' is incomplete and incorrectly structured. The corrected sentence places the adverb 'often' properly and completes the thought.

× You know, in my cell phone, most of the photograph are about animals.

✓ You know, on my cell phone, most of the photographs are about animals.

'Photograph' should be plural 'photographs' to match 'most of'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to content stored on a device.

× You know, in my cell phone, most of the photograph are about animals.

✓ You know, on my cell phone, most of the photographs are about animals.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to files or photos stored on a device; 'on' is the correct preposition.

× So there's there's not so many flowers.

✓ So there aren't so many flowers.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular, but 'flowers' is plural. The correct form is 'there aren't' for plural nouns.

× my girlfriend asked me to to buy some flowers for her in volunteer days or birthdays or you know, any, any set, any celebrity.

✓ My girlfriend asked me to buy some flowers for her on Valentine's Day, birthdays, or any special occasion.

The phrase 'in volunteer days' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on Valentine's Day'. Also, 'any set, any celebrity' is unclear and replaced with 'any special occasion' for clarity.