Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I extremely enjoy' nên là 'I really enjoy'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'flowers' nhiều lần. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy flowers because they are beautiful and have a pleasant fragrance, which helps me relax. For example, I especially like roses and jasmine.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'people who like flowers'). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi từ vựng như 'flowery' không đúng nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, many people I know love flowers. For instance, my mother enjoys gardening and has planted roses and chrysanthemums at home. She usually waters them and admires their beauty every morning before work.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác, ví dụ 'flowers' thay vì 'flowery', 'plant' thay vì 'planned'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn.

Exemplo: Actually, no. I live in a big city where it's hard to see many flowers on the streets. However, some people plant trees and flowers on their balconies or in nearby parks.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc tốt, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai như 'flowery'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể.

Exemplo: Sometimes I take photos of flowers, but I'm not very interested in them. Usually, I only take pictures when I visit parks or flower festivals.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác, ví dụ 'send flowers' thay vì 'send forwarded'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Definitely, many people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like graduations, Mother's Day, Teacher's Day, or birthdays. It's a common way to express love and care.

× Actually yes I extremely enjoy flowers.

✓ Actually yes, I extremely enjoy flowers.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'Actually yes' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving clarity and flow.

× An I also love some kinds of flower like rose or Jasmine.

✓ And I also love some kinds of flowers like rose or jasmine.

The word 'An' is a typo and should be 'And'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'some kinds of'. Proper nouns like 'jasmine' should not be capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence.

× I know a lot of people who likes flower better.

✓ I know a lot of people who like flowers better.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'people' (plural), so the verb should be 'like' not 'likes'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× She have planted some kinds of flowery in Elberton at home like rose or chicks or just mean and so on.

✓ She has planted some kinds of flowers in Elberton at home like rose or chicks or just mean and so on.

The subject 'She' requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'flowery' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. The phrase 'chicks or just mean' is unclear and may be a transcription error, but no correction is made as per instructions.

× She always wanted them an have a habit up watching them before going to work at in the morning.

✓ She always wanted them and has a habit of watching them before going to work in the morning.

The phrase 'have a habit up watching' is incorrect; it should be 'has a habit of watching'. Also, 'at in the morning' is incorrect; it should be 'in the morning'.

× Actually no, because I'm living in the big city so watching flowery on the street is the difficult things.

✓ Actually no, because I live in the big city so watching flowers on the street is difficult.

The present continuous 'I'm living' is less appropriate here; simple present 'I live' is better for a general fact. 'Flowery' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. 'The difficult things' is awkward; 'difficult' suffices.

× But there are some still some people who planned tree on the in the part on their balconies.

✓ But there are still some people who plant trees in the park on their balconies.

The sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'planned' should be 'plant' (present tense), 'tree' should be plural 'trees', 'on the in the part' is incorrect and should be 'in the park'. The phrase 'on their balconies' is acceptable.

× Uhm, I think it's sometimes.

✓ Uhm, I think sometimes it is.

The sentence is awkward; repositioning 'sometimes' improves clarity. However, this is more of a stylistic issue than a strict grammar error.

× I'm not really interested in flower is so I only take and I'm only take photos of flowery if I.

✓ I'm not really interested in flowers, so I only take photos of flowers if I...

'Flower is' should be 'flowers'. The phrase 'I only take and I'm only take' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'I only take'. 'Flowery' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as per instructions.

× Go to the park or I-10 in Flower festival.

✓ go to the park or I go to the flower festival.

The phrase 'I-10 in Flower festival' is unclear; assuming 'I go to the flower festival' is intended. 'Flower' should not be capitalized unless part of a proper noun.

× Definitely yes is many people in my country often send forwarded to other especially in special occasion like graduation, the mother days or the teacher days or the birthday and so on.

✓ Definitely yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others especially on special occasions like graduation, Mother's Day, Teacher's Day, birthdays, and so on.

'Is many people' is incorrect; 'many people' suffices. 'Send forwarded to other' is incorrect; it should be 'send flowers to others'. 'In special occasion' should be 'on special occasions'. Proper nouns like 'Mother's Day' and 'Teacher's Day' should be capitalized and possessive.

× So it is the this is the way for us to send our love and care to anyone.

✓ So this is the way for us to send our love and care to anyone.

The phrase 'it is the this is' is redundant; 'this is' suffices.