Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In your answer, try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'fresh flowers' instead of 'fresh flower', and avoid unclear phrases like 'on which bring me more excitement an'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty and color to the environment. For example, having fresh flowers at home creates a happy and refreshing atmosphere that helps me feel relaxed and excited.

Sugestão: Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. For example, use 'loves flowers' instead of 'loves a flower', and 'enjoys gardening' instead of 'enjoyed gardening'. Also, clarify unclear phrases like 'Groleau variety of arose' and 'brave of her an home'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, my sister loves flowers. She enjoys gardening and often spends her weekends planting many types of flowers. She finds that flowers help her relax and feel rewarded. For example, she recently grew a variety of roses that made her home look beautiful.

Sugestão: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. For example, say 'there are a lot of flowers' instead of 'a lot of flower'. Avoid incomplete sentences like 'especially it. Has in the city places'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about locations.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in city places like public parks and gardens. For example, during spring, many people enjoy planting flowers because they believe flowers symbolize beauty and happiness.

Sugestão: Use correct plural forms and verb agreement, such as 'photos' instead of 'photo' and 'help' instead of 'help'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid redundancy like 'also' and 'as well' together.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I find their colors and shapes very beautiful. For example, when I work in the park or visit a garden, I like taking close-up shots to appreciate their delicate details. This helps me relax and enjoy nature.

Sugestão: Correct spelling and grammar are important. For example, use 'send flowers' instead of 'offense and flower'. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about occasions and explain why flowers are popular gifts.

Exemplo: Yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others because they find their shapes and colors beautiful. Flowers are commonly given on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. They are considered a beautiful and meaningful gift.

× I enjoy having fresh flower at home because they create a sense of happiness and refreshing atmosphere on which bring me more excitement an. Reduce distress.

✓ I enjoy having fresh flowers at home because they create a sense of happiness and a refreshing atmosphere which brings me more excitement and reduces distress.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'atmosphere' needs the article 'a' before it. The phrase 'on which bring me' is incorrect; it should be 'which brings me' to agree with singular 'atmosphere'. 'Reduce distress' should be 'reduces distress' to agree with singular subject.

× my sister is absolutely loves a flower.

✓ my sister absolutely loves flowers.

The verb 'loves' should not be preceded by 'is' in this context. Also, 'a flower' should be plural 'flowers' to generalize the love for flowers.

× She enjoyed gardening and often spends her time on the weekend to planned many types of flowers.

✓ She enjoys gardening and often spends her time on the weekend planning many types of flowers.

The verb 'enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoys' to match 'often spends'. 'To planned' is incorrect; it should be 'planning' as the gerund form after 'spends her time'.

× She find out that flower made her relax and reward.

✓ She finds out that flowers make her relax and feel rewarded.

The verb 'find' should be 'finds' for third person singular. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Made' should be present tense 'make' to match 'finds out'. 'Reward' should be 'feel rewarded' for correct expression.

× she recently Groleau variety of arose because it brave of her an home beautifully.

✓ She recently grew a variety of roses because it brightened her home beautifully.

'Groleau' is likely a misspelling of 'grew'. 'Arose' should be 'roses'. 'Brave of her an home' is incorrect; it should be 'brightened her home'. The sentence is corrected to past tense consistent with 'recently'.

× Yes, I think there are a lot of flower where I live, especially it.

✓ Yes, I think there are a lot of flowers where I live, especially in the city.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Especially it' is unclear and corrected to 'especially in the city' for clarity.

× Has in the city places like public park and garden.

✓ There are places in the city like public parks and gardens.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb. Corrected to a proper sentence with 'There are' and plural nouns 'parks' and 'gardens'.

× many people offer planning planting flowers because they think flowers is a sign of beauty and happiness.

✓ many people offer planting flowers because they think flowers are a sign of beauty and happiness.

'Offer planning planting' is incorrect; 'offer planting' is acceptable but 'offer to plant' would be better. 'Flowers is' should be 'flowers are' for subject-verb agreement.

× I often take photo of flowers in my daily life because I find their color and shape our very beautiful.

✓ I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their color and shape very beautiful.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match the context. 'Our' is incorrect and should be removed.

× I like taking close up shot to appreciate their delicate detail.

✓ I like taking close-up shots to appreciate their delicate details.

'Close up shot' should be plural 'close-up shots'. 'Detail' should be plural 'details'.

× It's also help me to relax and enjoy nature as well.

✓ It also helps me to relax and enjoy nature as well.

'Help' should be 'helps' for third person singular. 'Also' is better placed before the verb.

× many people in my country offense and flower to other because they find out their shapes and colors are very beautiful.

✓ many people in my country often send flowers to others because they find their shapes and colors very beautiful.

'Offense and flower' is incorrect; likely meant 'often send flowers'. 'Other' should be plural 'others'. 'Find out' is better as 'find' here.

× Not only they can use them on special occasion like birthday, wedding, anniversary.

✓ Not only can they use them on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'Not only can they use them' is correct inversion. 'Occasion' and event names should be plural.

× Originally flower are considered as a gift and beautiful.

✓ Originally, flowers are considered a gift and beautiful.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Considered as' should be 'considered' without 'as'. Added comma after 'Originally'.