Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much because they look beautiful and smell wonderful. Moreover, colorful flowers always catch my eyes and brighten my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on making clear, complete sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, many people love flowers because they look beautiful and have a pleasant fragrance. For example, everyone enjoys seeing colorful flowers in gardens and during special occasions.

Sugestão: Your answer is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be specific about the types of flowers and reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: Yes, there are plenty of flowers at my house, including hibiscus, rose, and mogra. Among them, my favorite is the rose because of its beautiful color.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat disjointed and repetitive. Try to combine your ideas into complete sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I don't take photos of flowers every day, but I prefer to take pictures whenever I have leisure time. I also love to see colorful, fresh flowers in my garden.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to answer directly and provide specific details with proper sentence structure and linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as weddings. It is a preferred way to congratulate the couple.

× Yes, I do love flowers very much because they are. They are. They look beautiful and they smell good.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers very much because they look beautiful and smell good.

The original sentence contains incomplete and repeated fragments ('because they are. They are.') which disrupt sentence structure. The corrected sentence removes these fragments to form a complete and coherent sentence.

× And flowers, the colorful flowers always like catch my eyes.

✓ And colorful flowers always catch my eyes.

The phrase 'always like catch my eyes' is incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary here and 'catch' should be used directly. Also, 'my eyes' is the correct object. The correction simplifies and corrects the quantifier usage.

× Everyone loves flowers because they are they have they look beautiful and have pleasant fragrance.

✓ Everyone loves flowers because they look beautiful and have a pleasant fragrance.

The original sentence has repeated and incomplete phrases ('they are they have they look'). The correction removes redundancy and forms a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× Colorful flowers cashed my everyones isan Everyones enjoy seeing them in gardens and on special occasions.

✓ Colorful flowers catch everyone's eye. Everyone enjoys seeing them in gardens and on special occasions.

The original sentence contains nonsensical phrases ('cashed my everyones isan Everyones'). The correction replaces these with correct quantifiers and verbs to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, in my house there plenty of flowers in different types of flowers such as hibiscus rose. Mogra.

✓ Yes, in my house there are plenty of flowers of different types such as hibiscus, rose, and mogra.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'are' after 'there' and has fragmented listing of flowers. The correction adds the verb and properly lists the flower types for grammatical correctness.

× Among that my favorite one is rose becaused do to its color.

✓ Among them, my favorite one is the rose because of its color.

The original sentence misuses 'becaused do to' and lacks proper conjunctions. The correction uses 'because of' to indicate reason and adds 'the' before 'rose' for specificity.

× Not daily life, but I prefer taking. Taking photos of flowers whenever I have leisure time.

✓ Not daily, but I prefer taking photos of flowers whenever I have leisure time.

The original sentence is fragmented with repeated 'Taking.' The correction combines the fragments into a single coherent sentence.

× And I love to. See colorful fresh flowers in my garden.

✓ And I love to see colorful fresh flowers in my garden.

The original sentence is fragmented with a period after 'to'. The correction removes the period to form a complete sentence.

× Yes. On special location such as wedding. And people do send flowers to the. Couple. Got the book it is. Preferred.

✓ Yes, on special occasions such as weddings, people do send flowers to the couple. It is preferred.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear phrases ('Got the book it is.'). The correction combines fragments into coherent sentences and replaces unclear phrases with appropriate expressions.