Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời tránh lặp từ quá nhiều. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and colorful. They always make me feel relaxed and happy whenever I see them.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ, tránh lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp gây khó hiểu.

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She often goes to the flower shop to buy flowers to decorate our house, and I also enjoy flowers because of her.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in a busy city full of modern buildings and cars. Therefore, I usually buy flowers from the supermarket when I want some.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, đồng thời diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách chính xác.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I am very busy with work and study. However, when I have free time, I like to take photos of flowers to decorate my house.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, đồng thời diễn đạt ý kiến một cách cụ thể và dễ hiểu.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because it is a traditional way to express emotions. Sending flowers can make the recipient feel happy and respected.

× Owns an I think flowers make me feel relaxed an I love flower very much.

✓ I think flowers make me feel relaxed and I love flowers very much.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and contains conjunction errors. 'Owns an' is incorrect and should be removed. 'an' should be 'and'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× Yes I do I think is my mouth.

✓ Yes, I do. I think it is my mom.

'My mouth' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'my mom'. Also, the sentence lacks proper punctuation and subject pronoun 'it' before 'is'.

× My mom seemed to me both me an my mouth really love flower an my mouth and me old usually go to their store Aran by flower to decorate my house.

✓ My mom seemed to me that both my mom and I really love flowers, and my mom and I usually go to their store to buy flowers to decorate my house.

The sentence has multiple pronoun errors: 'my mouth' should be 'my mom', 'me old' should be 'I', 'Aran by flower' should be 'to buy flowers'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× I think no because I am a student at the university so I live in our busy city around me by all of building or modern buildings and many car.

✓ I think no because I am a student at the university, so I live in a busy city surrounded by many buildings and cars.

Incorrect prepositions 'around me by all of building' should be 'surrounded by many buildings'. Also, 'car' should be plural 'cars'.

× So if I want to buy flower I often go to a supermarket.

✓ So if I want to buy flowers, I often go to a supermarket.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to buying flowers in general.

× Well no I don't, I don't like for OR flowers in my daily life because I am herb busy person so I spent all of my time to work or study but when I have much square time I will take a photo to decoration my house.

✓ Well no, I don't. I don't like flowers in my daily life because I am a very busy person, so I spend all of my time working or studying. But when I have much spare time, I will take photos to decorate my house.

Incorrect prepositions and word choices: 'like for OR flowers' should be 'like flowers'; 'herb busy' should be 'very busy'; 'spent' should be 'spend' to match present tense; 'much square time' should be 'much spare time'; 'take a photo to decoration' should be 'take photos to decorate'.

× I will take a photo to decoration my house.

✓ I will take photos to decorate my house.

The verb 'take' is correctly used with 'will' for future tense, but 'to decoration' is incorrect; it should be 'to decorate' (infinitive form). Also, 'photo' should be plural 'photos' to match general meaning.

× I think yes, because I think is she are traditional ways to impression emotion and I think if you send flower to others other feel happy's relected Ann are filling in respect.

✓ I think yes, because I think it is a traditional way to express emotions, and I think if you send flowers to others, they feel happy, respected, and filled with respect.

Pronoun errors: 'is she are' should be 'it is'; 'impression emotion' should be 'express emotions'; 'send flower' should be 'send flowers'; 'other feel happy's relected Ann are filling in respect' is unclear and corrected to 'they feel happy, respected, and filled with respect'.