Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be specific about what you like about flowers.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because of their vibrant colors and variety. Moreover, their distinct and pleasant fragrance is very attractive to me.

Sugestão: Focus on clear sentence construction and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your girlfriend's interest in flowers.

Exemplo: Yes, my girlfriend loves flowers, especially receiving them as gifts. She also has a small garden at home where she grows various flowers and plants, which she often uses to decorate our house.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to contrast the urban environment with your terrace garden and be specific about the types of flowers or plants you grow.

Exemplo: There are not many flowers around because I live in a highly urbanised city. However, I have a terrace garden where I grow some flowering plants that bloom beautifully every day.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and verb tenses. Use linking words to explain when and why you take photos, and be specific about your interest in flowers.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers whenever I visit places decorated with them. I enjoy capturing their beauty and usually send the pictures to my girlfriend, who also loves flowers.

Sugestão: Clarify your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific cultural context about flower gifting in your country.

Exemplo: Not many people in my country send flowers as gifts because it is not a common tradition. Additionally, the limited variety of flowers available locally makes it less popular.

× Yes, I do love flowers because of its colors and different different different colors and the variety of flowers and main reason that I love flowers is about. Is it smell? 'Cause it has N distinct smell and which is a very attractive to me.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers because of their colors and the variety of flowers. The main reason that I love flowers is their smell because they have a distinct smell which is very attractive to me.

The pronoun 'its' is incorrect when referring to 'flowers' which is plural; it should be 'their'. Also, the sentence structure was unclear and repetitive; it was corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, my girlfriend loves her flowers a lot of especially in a gift manner.

✓ Yes, my girlfriend loves flowers a lot, especially as gifts.

The phrase 'her flowers' is unnecessary unless specifying ownership, and 'a lot of' is incorrectly used here. The sentence was corrected to use 'flowers' generally and to improve clarity.

× She also had her tells garden at her home where she used to grow a different flowers are different different plants and other would take those flowers and use it as a decoration in his home.

✓ She also has a small garden at her home where she grows different flowers and plants, and others take those flowers to use as decoration in their homes.

The preposition 'at' is correct, but the sentence had multiple errors including tense inconsistency and pronoun misuse. 'Had' was changed to 'has' to match present tense, and pronouns were corrected for agreement.

× She also had her tells garden at her home where she used to grow a different flowers are different different plants and other would take those flowers and use it as a decoration in his home.

✓ She also has a small garden at her home where she grows different flowers and plants, and others take those flowers to use as decoration in their homes.

The phrase 'a different flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. It was corrected to 'different flowers'.

× other would take those flowers and use it as a decoration in his home.

✓ others would take those flowers and use them as decoration in their homes.

The pronouns 'it' and 'his' do not agree with the plural noun 'flowers' and the plural subject 'others'. They were corrected to 'them' and 'their' respectively.

× Not that much work that I lived in a live in a very urban city and it is very developed around my house.

✓ Not that many because I live in a very urban city and it is very developed around my house.

The phrase 'Not that much work' is incorrect; it should be 'Not that many' to refer to countable nouns like flowers. Also, tense was corrected from past 'lived' to present 'live' to match context.

× Not that much work that I lived in a live in a very urban city and it is very developed around my house.

✓ Not that many because I live in a very urban city and it is very developed around my house.

The verb tense 'lived' was incorrect as the speaker is talking about the current situation; it was corrected to 'live' to reflect present tense.

× But I have an A terrace garden for well there I have grown some trees or some plants which is a very girl which has very good flowers every day.

✓ But I have a terrace garden where I have grown some trees and plants which are very good and have beautiful flowers every day.

The preposition 'for well there' is incorrect and was replaced with 'where' to indicate location. Also, 'which is a very girl' is nonsensical and corrected to 'which are very good'.

× But I have an A terrace garden for well there I have grown some trees or some plants which is a very girl which has very good flowers every day.

✓ But I have a terrace garden where I have grown some trees and plants which are very good and have beautiful flowers every day.

The verb 'is' was incorrectly used with plural subject 'trees and plants'; it was corrected to 'are' to agree in number.

× Yes I do whenever I visit someplace where they keep a flower as a decorations or if they have a plants of flowers there so I make sure that I clicked at least one photo of that flower that I very into flowers and I send him to my girlfriend.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I visit someplace where they keep flowers as decorations or have plants with flowers, I make sure to click at least one photo of the flower because I am very into flowers and I send it to my girlfriend.

The prepositions and articles were incorrect: 'a flower as a decorations' should be 'flowers as decorations'; 'a plants of flowers' should be 'plants with flowers'. Also, 'clicked' was changed to 'click' to match present tense, and pronouns corrected from 'him' to 'it'.

× I make sure that I clicked at least one photo of that flower that I very into flowers and I send him to my girlfriend.

✓ I make sure to click at least one photo of that flower because I am very into flowers and I send it to my girlfriend.

The verb 'clicked' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'click' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'send' is present tense and should be consistent.

× I send him to my girlfriend.

✓ I send it to my girlfriend.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect when referring to 'photo' which is neuter; it should be 'it'.

× Not that merger because the giving flower as a gift order as a something like that is not that famous in my country because there is not that much variety of flowers available in my local area or in my country.

✓ Not that much because giving flowers as gifts is not very common in my country since there is not much variety of flowers available in my local area or in my country.

The phrase 'Not that merger' is incorrect and was corrected to 'Not that much'. Also, 'the giving flower as a gift order as a something like that' was corrected to 'giving flowers as gifts' for clarity and correctness.

× Not that merger because the giving flower as a gift order as a something like that is not that famous in my country because there is not that much variety of flowers available in my local area or in my country.

✓ Not that much because giving flowers as gifts is not very common in my country since there is not much variety of flowers available in my local area or in my country.

The preposition 'in' is correctly used, but the phrase 'not that famous' is better expressed as 'not very common' in this context.

× So. But people of my country do not prefer to give to flowers.

✓ So, people in my country do not prefer to give flowers.

The phrase 'give to flowers' is incorrect; the preposition 'to' is unnecessary here. Also, 'people of my country' is better expressed as 'people in my country'.