Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“all out almost every week”和“more live and cozy”不符合英语习惯。建议简化表达，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much. I buy them almost every week and decorate my room and living room with them. They make the whole space feel more lively and cozy.

Sugestão: 回答重复且有语法错误，如“wake and decorate”，“more live and cozy”，“put me on high in high spirits”等表达不准确。建议避免重复，使用正确的短语和句子结构。

Exemplo: Actually, I am the one who loves flowers the most. I buy them every month and decorate my room and living room. They make the space feel lively and cozy, and seeing them always lifts my spirits.

Sugestão: 回答语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达意思，并使用连接词使回答连贯。

Exemplo: Not really, because I live in the city and there are not many flowers around. However, there is a flower shop downstairs, and in spring, some neighborhoods have small flower beds, which are nice to see.

Sugestão: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误，如“we will take photos when eyes say”，“I sang it can make me high in high spirit”等，影响理解。建议简化句子，使用正确表达。

Exemplo: Not every day, but I often take photos when I see beautiful and gorgeous flowers. Looking at these photos always lifts my mood.

Sugestão: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，如“flower cultural hair”，“people juice and flowers”，“anniversary's”等，且表达不连贯。建议使用简单句，准确表达文化差异。

Exemplo: Compared with Western countries, the flower culture in my country is not very strong. People usually send flowers on special occasions like birthdays, anniversaries, or hospital visits, but not very often in daily life.

× I buy flowers all out almost every week and decorate my room and living room with them.

✓ I buy flowers almost every week and decorate my room and living room with them.

句中“all out almost every week”表达不正确，应该去掉“all out”，因为“almost every week”已经表达了频率，且“all out”用法错误。

× It's just makes the whole space more live and cozy.

✓ It just makes the whole space more lively and cozy.

“live”是动词或形容词，表示“活的”，此处应使用副词“lively”来修饰“space”，表示“更有生气的”。

× Exactly, I think it's me.

✓ Exactly, I think it's me who loves flowers.

句子不完整，单独说“it's me”不明确，应该补充完整表达。

× I will wake and decorate my room and living room with them.

✓ I will buy and decorate my room and living room with them.

“wake”是“醒来”的意思，语境中应为“buy”（买），动词使用错误。

× It just makes the whole space more live and cozy and put me on high in high spirits when I see them.

✓ It just makes the whole space more lively and cozy and puts me in high spirits when I see them.

“live”应改为“lively”；“put me on high in high spirits”表达错误，正确表达是“puts me in high spirits”，动词和介词搭配错误。

× Not really and they been city so there aren't there aren't flowers around.

✓ Not really, because it's a city, so there aren't many flowers around.

“they been city”语法错误，应为“it's a city”；重复“there aren't”；缺少数量词“many”。

× Others count flower shop downstairs, but during spring some neighborhoods have.

✓ There is a flower shop downstairs, but during spring some neighborhoods have flowers.

“Others count flower shop downstairs”表达不清，应改为“There is a flower shop downstairs”；句子不完整，补充“flowers”。

× Have little flower beds which is nice to see.

✓ There are little flower beds which are nice to see.

缺少主语“there are”；“flower beds”复数，谓语应用复数“are”。

× And exactly not every day.

✓ Not exactly every day.

句首不应使用“and”，且表达应为“Not exactly every day”。

× But I really we will take photos when eyes say some beautiful and gorgeous raise flowers.

✓ But I really will take photos when I see some beautiful and gorgeous roses.

“we will”错误，应为“I will”；“eyes say”错误，应为“I see”；“raise flowers”应为“roses”。

× I sang it can make me high in high spirit when I see them.

✓ I think it can make me feel high in high spirits when I see them.

“sang”错误，应为“think”；“high in high spirit”表达错误，应为“feel high in high spirits”。

× Compared with Western countries and say the flower cultural hair is not that crazy, like people juice and flowers for birthday, anniversary's or hospital visits but it's not something.

✓ Compared with Western countries, the flower culture here is not that crazy, like people sending flowers for birthdays, anniversaries, or hospital visits, but it's not something

“and say”错误，应去掉；“flower cultural hair”应为“flower culture”；“people juice and flowers”错误，应为“people sending flowers”；“birthday, anniversary's”复数形式错误，应为“birthdays, anniversaries”。

× Super often in daily life, it's just like a special currency.

✓ It's not super often in daily life; it's just like a special custom.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语；“currency”用词不当，应为“custom”（习俗）。