Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up everyone's life. Moreover, people often feel rejuvenated and refreshed when they see or smell flowers. My favourite flower is the rose because of its beautiful scent and appearance.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and grammar correction. Avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I think almost everyone loves flowers. For example, my husband likes flowers because they bring beauty and joy to life. He especially loves roses and often gives me roses as a gift.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, provide specific examples and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Absolutely. I live in Canada, and there are numerous flowers available here. Moreover, there are many parks and gardens where different kinds of flowers grow, such as roses, sunflowers, and jasmine, which add beauty to the surroundings.

Sugestão: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammar and word choice errors. Use correct verb tenses and articles, and avoid awkward phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas naturally.

Exemplo: Definitely. Whenever I see flowers, I prefer to take pictures of them as a memory. Because flowers enhance the beauty of the photos, I also like to make videos featuring flowers.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use clear, simple language. Use linking words to explain reasons and give examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: In my opinion, most people like to give flowers on special occasions or when they meet someone after a long time. For example, when I first met my husband, he gave me flowers as a gesture of affection.

× Absolutely, I love flowers becauses of it flourish everyone's life.

✓ Absolutely, I love flowers because they flourish in everyone's life.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'it flourish' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'flourish' and the pronoun should be 'they' to agree with the plural subject.

× Moreover, people also feel more rejuvenate and refresh whenever they. See any flowers or smell it?

✓ Moreover, people also feel more rejuvenated and refreshed whenever they see any flowers or smell them.

The pronoun 'they' should be followed by the verb 'see' without a period. Also, 'rejuvenate' and 'refresh' should be in past participle form 'rejuvenated' and 'refreshed' to describe feelings. The pronoun 'it' referring to flowers should be plural 'them'.

× And my favorite flower is a rose so definite.

✓ And my favorite flower is a rose, so definitely.

The word 'definite' is an adjective but the adverb 'definitely' is needed here to modify the implied verb or sentence. Also, a comma is needed before 'so'.

× Yes L as everyone love flowers and however here I would like to talk about my husband.

✓ Yes, I think everyone loves flowers; however, here I would like to talk about my husband.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'loves' (third person singular). Also, 'L as' seems to be a typo for 'I think'. The sentence needs punctuation for clarity.

× He also like flowers because flowers bring they bring beauty and joy to their life.

✓ He also likes flowers because flowers bring beauty and joy to their life.

The subject 'He' requires the verb 'likes' (third person singular). The phrase 'they bring' is redundant and should be removed.

× Moreover, my husband love arose and they also gave me rose.

✓ Moreover, my husband loves roses and he also gave me a rose.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with singular subject 'my husband'. 'Arose' is incorrect; it should be 'roses' (plural noun). 'They' is incorrect pronoun here; 'he' should be used. Also, 'a rose' needs the article 'a'.

× I live in Canada, I was fooled and there are a numerous flowers available.

✓ I live in Canada, I was fooled, and there are numerous flowers available.

The phrase 'a numerous flowers' is incorrect; 'numerous' is a determiner and does not need 'a'. Also, the sentence is awkward; 'I was fooled' seems out of context and may be a typo.

× Moreover, there is a many parks as well as gardens were a different kinds of flowers available, for example, rose, sunflower, Jasmine and many more which brings beauty to the.

✓ Moreover, there are many parks as well as gardens where different kinds of flowers are available, for example, roses, sunflowers, jasmine, and many more which bring beauty to the area.

'There is a many parks' is incorrect; it should be 'there are many parks' because 'parks' is plural. 'Were' should be 'where' to indicate location. 'A different kinds' is incorrect; 'different kinds' is plural and does not need 'a'. Flower names should be plural when referring to types generally. 'Brings' should be 'bring' to agree with plural subject 'flowers'. The sentence was incomplete and was completed for clarity.

× Definitely whenever I EOC flowers at that time I preferred to take a picture with them as a memory.

✓ Definitely, whenever I see flowers, I prefer to take a picture with them as a memory.

'EOC' seems to be a typo for 'see'. 'Preferred' is past tense but the sentence context suggests present habitual action, so 'prefer' is correct.

× Becauses whenever I take picture with the flowers, it enhance the beauty of the picture.

✓ Because whenever I take pictures with the flowers, it enhances the beauty of the picture.

'Becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'Because'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match general meaning. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Moreover, I also like to make videos with the flowers.

✓ Moreover, I also like to make videos of the flowers.

The preposition 'with' is less appropriate here; 'of' is better to indicate the videos are about the flowers.

× In my opinion, majority of people like to give flowers to someone on the special occasions or whenever they meet someone for after a long time at that time they give a flowers to them.

✓ In my opinion, the majority of people like to give flowers to someone on special occasions or whenever they meet someone after a long time; at that time, they give flowers to them.

'Majority' needs the definite article 'the'. 'The special occasions' should be 'special occasions' unless referring to specific ones. 'For after a long time' is incorrect; 'after a long time' is correct. 'A flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural and does not need 'a'.