Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать повторений и использовать более точные слова для описания запаха цветов.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I enjoy seeing them and smelling their beautiful fragrance. For me, flowers bring a sense of happiness and calmness.

Sugestão: Используйте правильные глаголы и структуру предложения. Следует избегать ошибок в словах и выражениях, например, 'snooze' вместо 'smell'.

Exemplo: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. For example, all my friends enjoy smelling flowers, and one of my close friends owns a flower shop.

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более ясным и логичным. Следует использовать связующие слова и правильные выражения для описания изменений во времени.

Exemplo: There used to be many flowers in my local area when I was a child, but nowadays there are fewer. I hope that in the future, there will be more flowers again.

Sugestão: Используйте правильные времена и избегайте разрывов в предложениях. Также стоит связать идеи более плавно.

Exemplo: To be honest, I have never taken photos of flowers. However, many of my friends often take pictures of flowers and share them on their Twitter or Instagram accounts.

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более грамматически правильным и логичным. Следует использовать подходящие слова и выражения для описания традиций.

Exemplo: Yes, many people in my country enjoy giving flowers as a surprise. It is especially appreciated by women because flowers bring them happiness.

× I really enjoy when I see the flowers and fill his smell.

✓ I really enjoy seeing the flowers and smelling their scent.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, not a clause starting with 'when'. Also, 'fill his smell' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'smelling their scent' to express perceiving the flowers' smell.

× I really enjoy when I see the flowers and fill his smell.

✓ I really enjoy seeing the flowers and smelling their scent.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrectly used to refer to flowers, which are inanimate objects. The correct possessive pronoun is 'their' for plural nouns like 'flowers'.

× It so handsome and beautiful smell.

✓ It has such a handsome and beautiful smell.

The sentence lacks a verb and uses 'handsome' (usually for people) incorrectly to describe a smell. 'Has' is needed to link the subject and description, and 'such a' emphasizes the quality of the smell.

× For me, the flowers at the things which can give the. Beautiful 4 hour. Walt.

✓ For me, flowers are things that can give a beautiful fragrance for hours.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to form a complete, coherent sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and clear meaning.

× my all friends really enjoy to snooze the flowers smell.

✓ All my friends really enjoy smelling the flowers.

'My all friends' is incorrect; the correct order is 'All my friends'. 'Enjoy to snooze' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in '-ing' form, and 'snooze' is the wrong verb; 'smell' is appropriate here.

× my all friends really enjoy to snooze the flowers smell.

✓ All my friends really enjoy smelling the flowers.

After 'enjoy', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, not the infinitive 'to snooze'. Also, 'snooze' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'smell'.

× my near friend have a flower shop.

✓ My close friend has a flower shop.

'My near friend' is incorrect; 'close friend' is the correct phrase. Also, 'friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live? Infinitely.

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live? Yes, definitely.

'Infinitely' is not appropriate here to answer the question about quantity. 'Definitely' or 'Yes, a lot' would be correct.

× Inven my local space when I. Leave. Until my chilhood and for nowadays we have a. Little few. Flowers.

✓ In my local area where I live, since my childhood until now, we have had only a few flowers.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× we have a. Little few. Flowers.

✓ We have only a few flowers.

'Little few' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'a few' to indicate a small number of countable nouns like 'flowers'.

× And I don't know why, but in the future I will too.

✓ And I don't know why, but in the future, I will too.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'future' for clarity. The phrase 'I will too' is incomplete; it should specify what the speaker will do, e.g., 'I will too have flowers' or 'I will too enjoy flowers'.

× To be honest, I never did take a photo with flowers.

✓ To be honest, I have never taken a photo with flowers.

The present perfect tense 'have never taken' is appropriate here to express an experience up to now, rather than the simple past 'did take'.

× my. Many of my friends. Take it. A photo with flowers and. Add his photos for his Twitter account or Instagram.

✓ Many of my friends take photos with flowers and add their photos to their Twitter or Instagram accounts.

'His' is incorrectly used; the correct possessive pronoun is 'their' to match the plural subject 'friends'. Also, 'take it a photo' is incorrect; it should be 'take photos'.

× Add his photos for his Twitter account or Instagram.

✓ Add their photos to their Twitter or Instagram accounts.

The correct preposition to indicate uploading or posting photos on social media is 'to', not 'for'.

× A lot of the people of my country really enjoy to give. A flowers for all the like surprise.

✓ A lot of people in my country really enjoy giving flowers as surprises to everyone they like.

'A lot of the people' is better as 'a lot of people'. 'Enjoy to give' should be 'enjoy giving'. 'A flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'for all the like surprise' is unclear and corrected to 'as surprises to everyone they like'.

× And for C with men. It is a really enjoyed surprise becauses it flowers gives her hapiness.

✓ And for women, it is a really enjoyable surprise because flowers give them happiness.

'C with men' is unclear; likely meant 'women'. 'Is a really enjoyed surprise' should be 'is a really enjoyable surprise'. 'Becauses' is a typo for 'because'. 'It flowers gives her hapiness' is incorrect; correct is 'flowers give them happiness' with subject-verb agreement and correct pronouns.