Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了对花的过敏情况，但语法和表达不够准确，建议注意语法结构，避免口语化的错误，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

Exemplo: No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to them, so it's difficult for me to be around them.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，建议注意时态和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, my mom loves flowers because she thinks they are beautiful and elegant. Whenever she is happy, my dad buys her flowers.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议加强语法练习，注意句子结构和词汇使用，避免断句错误。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers around my house, but not inside because I am allergic. My father plants many flowers like roses nearby, and my mother enjoys looking at them.

Sugestão: 回答表达不连贯，语法和词汇使用错误，建议练习句子连贯性和准确表达，避免使用错误词汇。

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I am passionate about photography. I also like to photograph other subjects, not just flowers.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，建议使用完整句子并注意词序，使表达更流畅自然。

Exemplo: Yes, in China, sending flowers is a way to show love. Many friends and couples often give flowers as gifts to each other.

× No, because I kinda like have a allergy for the flowers.

✓ No, because I kinda like having an allergy to flowers.

这里动词短语 'like have' 应该用动名词形式 'like having'，表示喜欢做某事。

× No, because I kinda like have a allergy for the flowers.

✓ No, because I kinda like having an allergy to flowers.

'a allergy' 中 'allergy' 是以元音音素开头的单词，前面应该用不定冠词 'an'。

× No, because I kinda like have a allergy for the flowers.

✓ No, because I kinda like having an allergy to flowers.

过敏通常用介词 'to'，而不是 'for'。

× Yes, my mom loves flowers because she think they are beautiful and. Elegant whenever she's happy, my dad Will bought her flowers.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers because she thinks they are beautiful and elegant. Whenever she's happy, my dad will buy her flowers.

句中 'and.' 句号位置错误，应连接 'elegant'；'she think' 主谓不一致，应为 'she thinks'；'Will bought' 时态错误，应为 'will buy'。

× Yes, my mom loves flowers because she think they are beautiful and. Elegant whenever she's happy, my dad Will bought her flowers.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers because she thinks they are beautiful and elegant. Whenever she's happy, my dad will buy her flowers.

主语 'she' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，变为 'thinks'。

× Yes, my mom loves flowers because she think they are beautiful and. Elegant whenever she's happy, my dad Will bought her flowers.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers because she thinks they are beautiful and elegant. Whenever she's happy, my dad will buy her flowers.

'Will bought' 是将来时和过去时混用，应改为将来时 'will buy'。

× Since I have a allergic to the flowers I can't near them but my mother loves seeing them.

✓ Since I am allergic to flowers, I can't be near them but my mother loves seeing them.

'have a allergic' 结构错误，应为 'am allergic'；'can't near them' 缺少动词，应为 'can't be near them'。

× So around my house my father pound. Many flowers like roses.

✓ So around my house my father plants many flowers like roses.

'pound' 用词错误，应为 'plants'；'Many flowers' 用法正确。

× So around my house my father pound. Many flowers like roses.

✓ So around my house my father plants many flowers like roses.

这里描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时 'plants'，而非过去时 'pound'。

× But since I am a photo grapher fever. Alright, not only take flowers, but also any other things.

✓ But since I am a photography enthusiast, I not only take photos of flowers, but also of other things.

'photographer fever' 词组错误，应为 'photography enthusiast'；句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, in China sending flowers it is means. They love each other, so many friends and lovers are likely to receive flowers like. A gift.

✓ Yes, in China, sending flowers means they love each other, so many friends and lovers are likely to receive flowers as a gift.

'sending flowers it is means' 结构错误，应为 'sending flowers means'；'like a gift' 应为 'as a gift'。