Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same reason twice.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because I am a nature lover and enjoy their beautiful fragrance. That's why I have planted many flowers in my garden.

Sugestão: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases like 'bookie or' and 'the bouquet was off rose flowers'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words such as 'because' and 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, my elder sister loves flowers. For her 19th birthday, I gifted her a bouquet of roses because she enjoys seeing different plants and appreciates their fragrance.

Sugestão: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear sentences. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' correctly. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers planted on every street in my hometown because they keep the environment fresh and peaceful. Moreover, people there love planting flowers as they believe it enhances the beauty of the area.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but has some repetition like 'to stay to stay' and minor grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use linking words effectively to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they make me happy throughout the day. Moreover, I share these pictures with my friends as flowers bring us peace and joy.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts because it is considered a kind gesture. Flowers bring happiness and help maintain good relationships.

× I always loves their fragrance.

✓ I always love their fragrance.

The verb 'love' should be in the base form 'love' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'Loves' is used with third person singular subjects, but 'I' requires 'love'.

× I gifted her a bookie or on her 19th birthday the bouquet was off rose flowers and she really loved it as she is a nature lover and she enjoys seeing different plants and always appreciate their beautiful fragrance.

✓ I gifted her a book on her 19th birthday; the bouquet was of rose flowers and she really loved it as she is a nature lover and she enjoys seeing different plants and always appreciates their beautiful fragrance.

The sentence had multiple issues: 'bookie or' seems to be a mishearing or typo and corrected to 'book'; 'was off' corrected to 'was of'; 'appreciate' should be 'appreciates' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Proper punctuation was added for clarity.

× there are a lot of flowers in my hometown to a on every street, the flowers are planted a because, uh, it, it keeps the environment fresh and the peaceful.

✓ There are a lot of flowers in my hometown; on every street, flowers are planted because it keeps the environment fresh and peaceful.

The phrase 'to a on every street' is incorrect and corrected to 'on every street'. The article 'the' before 'peaceful' is unnecessary and removed. The sentence was restructured for clarity.

× people in my hometown, I required a nature lover and that they love planting flowers if they believe that it enhances their beauty.

✓ People in my hometown are nature lovers and they love planting flowers because they believe it enhances their beauty.

The phrase 'I required a nature lover' is incorrect and replaced with 'are nature lovers' to correctly describe the people. 'If' changed to 'because' for logical connection. Pronouns adjusted for clarity.

× flowers is something which brings us peace and joy.

✓ flowers are something which bring us peace and joy.

'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'brings' should be 'bring' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers'.

× people in my country sent flowers as a gift to others.

✓ People in my country send flowers as a gift to others.

The sentence is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'send' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'sent'.