Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to combine ideas more smoothly and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words to connect your ideas and keep sentences complete.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses because of their beautiful red color. When I see flowers, I feel calm and relaxed, and their sweet fragrance adds to this soothing effect.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct pronouns. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers. My cousin Muskaan enjoys gardening and has grown many flowers and herbs in her garden because she likes their beauty and fragrance.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid sentence fragments and be more specific about the types of flowers or their colors.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My mother and I grow various flowers in our small garden, which looks very attractive. Whenever I see it, I feel calm and relaxed because of the sweet fragrance.

Sugestão: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and avoid listing words without explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photography and often take pictures of flowers such as sunflowers, lilies, jasmines, and especially roses, which are my favorite. When I feel bored, I go to my small garden at home to capture their beauty.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar errors. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Explain occasions when flowers are sent and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others on special occasions such as weddings, birthdays, and engagements. Flowers are a common gift to express happiness and good wishes.

× My favorite flower is rose.

✓ My favorite flower is the rose.

The noun 'rose' is a singular countable noun and requires a definite article 'the' when referring to a specific type or category as a favorite.

× Apart from this, the sweet fragrance of it. Is a source of relaxation and recreation.

✓ Apart from this, the sweet fragrance of it is a source of relaxation and recreation.

The sentence is incorrectly split into two fragments. Combining them into one complete sentence corrects the structure.

× She likes too much flowers and herbs.

✓ She likes flowers and herbs very much.

The phrase 'too much flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' is countable and 'too much' is used with uncountable nouns. Also, the placement of 'too much' is unnatural here; 'very much' is more appropriate.

× She has grown many flowers in his garden becauses or she likes she likes.

✓ She has grown many flowers in her garden because she likes them.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrect when referring to 'she'; it should be 'her'. The phrase 'becauses or she likes she likes' is unclear and should be corrected to 'because she likes them' for clarity and correctness.

× It and they're fragrance also.

✓ Their fragrance is also pleasant.

'It and they're fragrance' is incorrect. 'They're' is a contraction of 'they are' and does not fit here. The correct possessive pronoun is 'their' referring to the flowers' fragrance.

× In each many flowers are grown by me and my mother.

✓ Many flowers are grown by my mother and me in it.

The phrase 'In each many flowers' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be rephrased to indicate that many flowers are grown in the garden by the speaker and their mother.

× End of the fragrance of flowers are so sweet.

✓ The fragrance of the flowers is so sweet.

'End of the fragrance' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'The fragrance of the flowers'. Also, 'fragrance' is singular, so the verb should be 'is'.

× And I feel refreshes.

✓ And I feel refreshed.

'Refreshes' is a verb form; the correct adjective to describe a feeling is 'refreshed'.

× Definitely am a photo genic person and I like to capture pictures of flowers like.

✓ Definitely, I am a photogenic person and I like to capture pictures of flowers like

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'am' and 'photogenic' is one word. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× Sunflower. Lee and Justin, and specially Rose.

✓ sunflowers, lilies, jasmines, and especially roses.

The original sentence fragments are incomplete and contain misspelled flower names. Correcting the flower names and combining them into a proper list improves clarity.

× It is my favorite flowers and then when I feel bored that time I go to my house, small garden and capture.

✓ They are my favorite flowers, and when I feel bored, I go to my small garden at home and take pictures.

'It' is singular but refers to 'flowers' which is plural, so 'they' should be used. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Certainly in my country individuals or funds and flowers to others.

✓ Certainly, in my country, individuals often send flowers to others.

'Funds and flowers' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'send flowers'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper verb usage.

× Add some special occasions like marriage, inverse dream and the birthday party and their engagement.

✓ On special occasions like marriage, anniversaries, birthday parties, and engagements.

The phrase 'Add some special occasions' is incorrect. 'Inverse dream' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'anniversary'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And it and it still gives to people. Before their happiness.

✓ And flowers are still given to people to celebrate their happiness.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence conveying the intended meaning.