Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ví dụ, "flowers all my mental therapy" không chính xác và gây khó hiểu. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể có liên quan.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they help me relax and feel happy. For example, when my boyfriend gives me flowers, it really cheers me up after a stressful day.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc viết sai như "chili" thay vì "crazy" hoặc "keen". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: The first person I think of is my mom. She is very keen on flowers and often buys her favorite ones to decorate our house. She enjoys arranging them beautifully, which makes the atmosphere cheerful and welcoming.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Ví dụ, "my mom's often buys" nên là "my mom often buys". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Exemplo: Unfortunately, there aren't many types of flowers near our house because we live close to an industrial zone. Therefore, my mom often buys flowers from the traditional market to decorate our home and refresh the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Ví dụ, "tide up" nên là "tied up" và "a free time" nên là "free time". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: No, I don't take photos of flowers daily because I am usually tied up with work and research. However, when I have free time or go on vacation with my family, I sometimes take photos of flowers to capture the beauty of the places we visit.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng đại từ. Ví dụ, "send it to her best friends and I" nên là "send them to her best friends and me". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: I think many people in my country often send flowers to others, especially middle-aged women like my mom. For example, when she discovers a new type of flower, she takes photos, shares them on Facebook, and sends them to her best friends and me.

× Yes, definitely I have to say flowers all my mental therapy.

✓ Yes, definitely, I have to say flowers are all my mental therapy.

The original sentence lacks a verb linking 'flowers' and 'all my mental therapy'. Adding 'are' corrects the sentence structure by providing the necessary verb to complete the sentence.

× I contemplated a lot because it could total recharge my batteries after his stressful day of working.

✓ I contemplated a lot because it could totally recharge my batteries after his stressful day of working.

The word 'total' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'recharge'. The correct adverb form is 'totally'.

× She is chili into flowers because she often buys her favorite flowers to do over our house.

✓ She is crazy about flowers because she often buys her favorite flowers to decorate our house.

The phrase 'chili into' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'crazy about' to express strong liking. Also, 'to do over our house' is incorrect; 'to decorate our house' is the proper phrase.

× my mom's often buys flowers from traditional flowers market to decorate our house.

✓ my mom often buys flowers from the traditional flower market to decorate our house.

The possessive 'mom's' is incorrect here; it should be 'mom'. Also, 'traditional flowers market' should be 'the traditional flower market' to use the correct article and singular form for 'flower market'.

× Unfortunately I don't take photos of flowers on a daily basis because I am tide up in working and researching.

✓ Unfortunately, I don't take photos of flowers on a daily basis because I am tied up with working and researching.

The word 'tide' is a misspelling of 'tied'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'with' after 'tied up' to indicate being busy with activities.

× when I have a free time or take a vacation with my family, sometimes I take photos of flowers to capture the beauty of the explored destination.

✓ when I have free time or take a vacation with my family, sometimes I take photos of flowers to capture the beauty of the explored destination.

The phrase 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun here and should not have the article 'a'.

× she will definitely take photos, share it on her Facebook and send it to her best friends and I.

✓ she will definitely take photos, share them on her Facebook and send them to her best friends and me.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'photos' is plural; it should be 'them'. Also, 'I' should be 'me' as it is the object of the preposition 'to'.